The backstory is nearly non-existent and the MOC itself is really messy and simple - color distribution is awful and the colors themselves are rather generic, but they go well together.
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Ok so I will embellish more on the back story
It is better, but unnecessarily edgy and marry-sueā¦ish.
Well it is the whole story and it is complete so I am ok with it
Eh not so much a fan of the updated story, and to be honest, itās usually more important to focus on te MOC build rather than story but thatās up to you. As for the updated build it lolms too cluttered and some colors are asymmetrical, which donāt really work. All in all itās just a simple CCBS build, but itās not too bad.
Ok thanks
Now I have to get out of bed to fix Karon lol
Hehe youāre welcome buddy 
Yeah thanks for the advice Folk and everyone else he looks much better now thanks to you all takes a bow
That scarf thing looks a bit silly, but the rest is nice and simple.
Its a simple build, but I think it looks fairly nice! The colors flow well, and it does look like an assassin. I also like the scarf.
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@Folk Thanks for the sketch Folk, I think I have a new phone wall paper lol
@Altair The scarf is what sets the moc aside from the rest. I am usually open to criticism, but not about the scarf jk lol I am still ALWAYS open to constructive critisim
Edited for Double Post -Prpl
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love the scarf and colours i just feel the torso is a bit to short, it makes him look a tad squat.
Simple, but I like the weapons.
Looks mildly average as far as I can tell.
Though maybe you should switch/change the scarf to a blue scarf.
Sry I canāt, I used shoe laces for the scarf and I, sadly, only have grey on hand but I am going to the store tomorrow so maybe I could get some
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Pretty generic backstory, but the build is solid, if on the simpler side.
Color schemeās nice too.
6/10