Well I was going to keep it linear with the traditional kanohi
Kapura - Kakama, Speed
Macku - Hau, Protection
Tamaru - Miru, Levitation
Kopeke - Pakari, Strength
Hafu - Kau Kau, Water Breathing
Taipu - Akaku, X-Ray Vision
I gave each a mask that attributes to their great weakness.
Not to be picky, but the Miru is the Mask of Levitation, and the Kadin is the Mask of Flight.
He smol :3
Fixed. I forgot the proper wording.
One part of the story I had planned was that Hewkii dies protecting Macku, because she didn’t discover her mask power yet. She attempts to commit suicide, which triggers her mask power to activate.
That’s… depressing…
It’s a good idea, I just don’t like death in general. Matoro was hard on me…
Yes, I make a note of that as well. Kopeke can never look at Taipu.
i want to say that’s really really edgy
because it is
but i don’t want to be mean
Edginess works. Pacing is what keeps it at a children’s level. Too many dark moments can make a story too negative. Add humour and recovery between moments to keep it positive.
I’m literally working off the same plot building scale as Star Wars Rebels and Lord of the Rings.
Ah. That’s a good place to be.
Just wondering: you said you were a girl, yet this MOC is a guy… o.0?
bruh is not self MOC
Oh, ok. Kewl. 
The brown ones look like they fell into melted chocolate.