I read the folder and I like the choises you made. The torso is little bulky but other than that it is very good.
I hope for the competition you could have a small window on the main picture of showing the Kanohi mask function (which is very good) and the throwing function. While reading the folder I totally miseed the mechanic arm could be used to throw things.
I like all of the tiny details, but my favourite has to be the springs in the legs. Not only do they make sense with Lariska’s acrobatic nature in-story, but it’s also just a cool use of a fairly unique piece.