Makuta Contest Entry V2

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Hey guys! This is the second version of my entry for the Makuta Building Contest. Just like last time, I would like everyone who can to critique it. I would like as much advise as I can get! Thanks!

P.S Yes, I am aware that there is no armour on the lower legs. I am going to buy Onua 2016 to get the last two purple rib cage pieces I need.

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Ooh, it’s quite menacing.

Ignoring the armor on the lower legs, the legs look nice. Hopefully you cover up the side balljoints when you put on the ribcages.

The torso looks a little too much like a box but I understand you want it to be sturdy.

Don’t quite like the arms, I feel like the upper arms are too small and the lower arms are cool but too barebones.

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The body is amazing, but the legs and arms need work. A LOT of work.

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The knees are really unarmoured, but this has a ton of potential.

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Thank you so far for your helpful tips! I have a question about the topic, though. Do you guys think I should create a new topic every time I make some major changes, or should I post pictures on this topic instead?

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Edit the main post, then comment that you updated it.

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Thanks

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Thanks for all of your suggestions! I have made some adjustments based on your critiques, and this is what I have come up with. Again, I would very much appreciate any critiques you give me. Also, please note that the green rib cage pieces on the lower legs are temporary until I can get Onua 2016.

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The forearms look a little too bulky with all that stuff. Maybe put some of that armor and spikes on the upper arm so it’s more evenly distributed.

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Thank you! Could you maybe get your friends to critique this as well? I know I might sound a bit desperate, but I need all the help I can get. Thanks again!

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You’re welcome. And I don’t have any friends here on the message boards to ask.

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Ok, that’s alright.

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You guys probably know the drill by now. Again, I can use all the critiques I can get, so anything is very much appreciated.

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Looks a lot fuller and beefy; much better :ok_hand:

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Thanks! I’m going to post it at the end of the week, when I get Onua.