So here is my first moc in 5 years. Quite a lot of modifications were made to get to this point, and I am happy with how it turned out. 
The moc itself was loosly based off the character Xan Kriegor from Unreal Tournament.
Constructive critisism welcome, and hopefully I will be able to post instructions for anybody interested.
the bulk…
interesting moc, I like him
agreed… he is some kind of massive
Uh…he looks like JMP’s pecs flew off of his body and possessed Vultraz.
Nice MOC!
Very creative! 
Very nice. I especially like the attention given to the “suit-of-armor” aspect of the model
Its… bulky
Looks like I’m not the only scope wearer around here.
Nah…to much silver. looks too cluttered. needs more black and red. too much red and black. overused color scheme. the arms are too long. to many colors. needs more colors. the vultraz mask ruins the MOC. the textures do not work.
/s
I’m glad I noticed the /s before burning it in shame.
I can find one of Raptor’s critiques that I agree with. (Hint: It has nothing to do with color schemes)
Those feet are beautiful…
But now they’re stubby and too short!
I see you’ve swapped out the silver Kakamas on the shoulders for silver Pakaris.
Nice job!
They are stubby and too short, as well as skinny and they need more silver. speaking of silver, the multiple shades throw off the MOCs horrible balance.
######/s
Welp, that’s two fires gone to waste.
