Bio:
Malzak was one the EL (elemental lord) of fire. The EL managed to control the energized protodermis in Iconox. Soon he tried tapping into the power however multiple things happened to him. His body split in 2 creating Malzak and Taraki. These 2 immediately started to fight. They caused so much destruction that the great beings were forced to split their bodies and their ethereal forms and locked them both in the MU (matoran universe). They would soon be revived again by others seeking to take over the MU. (NOTE THAT THIS IS NOT THE WHOLE BIO AS THERE IS A LOT OF STUFF IN MY SERIES I WILL HAVE TO REVEAL; SO IF THERE ARE ANY PLOT HOLES IN MY STORY JUST KNOW THEY WILL BE FIXED.)
Weapons Malzak carried 2 weapons Thy Malice was a devastating sword forged from proto-steel The axe of fury was weapon malzak used to get rid of large areas in short amount of time He has 2 void blasters which he can use to blast void energy through.
Powers Malzak controls the void and can thus use it to his desires. The void is a very unknown source if energy in the bionicle universe so very little is known about the extent of it powers. His new body wore the mask of twilight. How he obtains it is unknown (will be explained in the series).
Yeah you will notice some pictures here and on my youtube video that weren’t on moc pages. That’s cuz mocpages wouldn’t except them for some reason.
Btw there is A LOT of work I need to do on this moc, but this is basically what he will look like in my series.
It looks pretty nice. However, the fact that all of the arms are connected by just one axle is a little off-putting, and kinda destroys the rest of the MOC’s appearance. Aside from that, this is one of the better MOCs of this size that I’ve seen.
+consistent coloir scheme
+some nice designs
+lots of weapons
+good for its scale
-weapons seems lacking
-awkward proportions
-some designs aren’t fantastic
-over cluttered
-large gaps in armour make it spindly in some places
-blue pins
Yea Ill figure out those things once i finish up with the other things i want to change with him.
I think adding some system parts into him should make him look much more better.
@Irrie Could you explain more on what you’re trying to tell me because I dont quite understand what you mean. Do yo mean that the arms being connected by one axle is awkward or do you mean they are just connected to the axle is what detracts from the total look. Or do you mean something else because its kinda confusing.
@king328 Be that as it may it will help me as a mocer become much better.
