A hero gone wrong, a fusion of elements.
consistent color scheme
MOC reflects the concept well
compact yet fully poseable
Ackar flame looks awkward.
back could use some color
7/10 good job
It could also be bigger
The size isn't an issue. If I thought the scale of this guy hurt the build, and that it could be significantly larger, I would have said so. As it is, it's a neat little MOC. In fact, I listed it's small stature as a pro.
I actually really like the concept and love how the build looks like this mutated abomination. I will say that the Ackar flame sword looks a bit out of place, but otherwise it looks pretty good, it looks like it could be an actual set made by LEGO, and I think that might have been what you were going for. Overall, I'd rate it an 8/10 for successfully conveying its intended concept.
Edit: If I may add, you might think about some type of extra articulation for the shoulders.
Despite it being called white, I see no white on it.
For those who don't speak Japanese, he means that the name "Mashiro" means white or pure.
Looks good from the front, but it needs some back covering.
Yeeup. You guys basically covered everything.
I would give this MOC a 6.5/10.
It Looks Pretty Good, but Could Use a Bit of Work.
That's actually meant to be ironic, since he is a fusion of two elements.
Cal summed up my thoughts.