Mashiro the Outcast

A hero gone wrong, a fusion of elements.

Back view

5 Likes

pros:
consistent color scheme
MOC reflects the concept well
compact yet fully poseable
cons:
Ackar flame looks awkward.
back could use some color
7/10 good job

4 Likes

It could also be bigger

The size isn't an issue. If I thought the scale of this guy hurt the build, and that it could be significantly larger, I would have said so. As it is, it's a neat little MOC. In fact, I listed it's small stature as a pro.

4 Likes

I actually really like the concept and love how the build looks like this mutated abomination. I will say that the Ackar flame sword looks a bit out of place, but otherwise it looks pretty good, it looks like it could be an actual set made by LEGO, and I think that might have been what you were going for. Overall, I'd rate it an 8/10 for successfully conveying its intended concept.

Edit: If I may add, you might think about some type of extra articulation for the shoulders.

2 Likes

Despite it being called white, I see no white on it.

7/10

For those who don't speak Japanese, he means that the name "Mashiro" means white or pure.

2 Likes

Looks good from the front, but it needs some back covering.

Yeeup. You guys basically covered everything.

I would give this MOC a 6.5/10.

It Looks Pretty Good, but Could Use a Bit of Work. :wink:

2 Likes

That's actually meant to be ironic, since he is a fusion of two elements.

2 Likes

Cal summed up my thoughts.

very edgy

UPDATE:

Now with full poseability!