So, this guy isn’t a BIONICLE OC, he belongs in an entirely different universe of my own creation. He is essentially a human (Paxdon) with a fragment of a chaotic god-like entity (Melfious) stubbornly stuck in his head. The armor is actually angel Warkeeper armor, and both the staff and the green bits are manifestations of Melfious’ power.
He’s not quite my favorite MOC I’ve made, simply because of the head. I dunno what it is, but it seems… off? Maybe a bit big?
are 8/8
Those arms bother me
I think its just the way you made the hands that make them look slightly oversized
The lower arms need to be turned, to allow lateral bicep movement, and I think you should add more armour to the top of the left arm or something
also I like that body, but it looks a bit too skeletal in some places, for me personally.
also I agree with the head, and the choice of mask
Yeah, I’d agree there. Unfortunately, it’s really hard to actually depict a human using BIONICLE pieces. The hands look cartoon-ish. As for the armor on the left shoulder, there’s not much I can do, but I can take another look.
Looks pretty legit. The arms are a bit cluttered and the arms should be redone, not just for lateral bicep movement, but for articulation at all. Not too keen on the Bohrok eyes being different directions either, but the pauldron looks sweet. Good to see your MOCs again.
