Quick poses and a @Nyran shot for later. I’ll give him a backstory.
Once a normal villager, Pirean fell again into the molten Energized Protodermis with 2 toa stones and a ball of fire energy. He emerged as a fire Titan.
After the protodermis incident, Pirean became a known protector of grammatica-nui, with the ability to fight with fire.
SKELETAL IMAGES: FITE MEEE
More to come soon! @Ekorak@StSc@ColdGoldLazarus@Cordak_the_Last_Makuta@nekroz have been summoned.
How exactly does one fall into these rare substances conveniently located next to each other?
Everything from the waist up look nice and dandy. But i’ve gotta say, those legs and feel look extremely strange and out of place. You should’ve stuck with pure CCBS legs, because the mix of technic bits and old Bonkle pieces clash way too much with the smooth look of the torso
Also, nice way to showcase your drawings in the background.
Looks…okay…
I’ll have to agree with Rockho that the Technic legs stand out like a sore thumb against the rest of the build. The Metru red there also doesn’t really match the rest of the color scheme, and some armor might be necessary for those knees. I sure the friction pieces hold it up fine but it like a twig between two pillars. I also can’t say I’m a fan of the clashing silver and gold, but that’s just me. Now, the chest…I highly recommend you find a way to raise the armor on the sides so they’re more parallel with the center shoulder piece, 'cuz right now…he’s looking a bit phat.
He has a nice appearance, but looks a little cluttered. The backs of the legs could use some work, and the neck could be a little longer. Other than that, not bad! 7.2/10.
wait a minute #HARSH CRITIQUE TIME! HIDE YOUR BEEFJSTAGS
Legs look horrid, not sure whats going on with the lowerlegs,
actually, the entire moc looks cluttered
The legs are too skinny for what you are trying to pull off
the random metru red irks me
Torso construction is kinda decent a suppose but the colours man, all over the place
You got metru red on the legs, silver and white on the torso, red and gold, trans red and gunmetal
Now
Like
The upper torso
Looks supper awkward
It looks like you tore of tahus upper section (the chest plate addon and head)
and you glued it to the torso, but you realised the middle was bare, so you added that addon piece
I fell that this update is a large step backwards.
He look really cluttered in build and colour and has awful proportions.
I actually liked the original Pirean quite a bit but this version seems unrecognizable as the same character.
Yes, they are.
Also, you weren’t summoned because you aren’t part of a group of people I know.
Also, this isn’t the final variation of Pirean. This is:
His torso looks strange… there’s no discernible chest that sticks out aside from that single Metru piece, and the grey beam along his stomach looks weird and unfinished. Red pieces sticking out from the knees look awkward too.
Anyhow, the earlier-posted Pirean was an older MoC from April 12, being me trying to torso. In fact, almost all of my Self-MoC attempts(Pireans) were tests. The first one demonstrated was actually me attempting a bulky torso, and then running out of parts. This one is one I plan on keeping together, and if I had another silver Inika thigh armor piece, I’d fill out the torso.
Also, to make note, He was inspired by @Political_Slime, @Cordak_the_Last_Makuta, and @MintedPineTea, who is ColdGoldLazarus. I’ll promote them somewhere else.
the latest form of Pieren looks nice.just get rip of the metru red and SPREAD THE COLORS OUT. that is your biggest problem. I understand the issue with lack of parts. my SM does not have the right amount of lime green. yours needs to ditch ether black or silver and then just armor up his lower arms.
