I’d have to agree, but the Rahkshi head bothers me more than the Nuva chest because they aren’t obnoxious and they work.
Her knees are really thing as well, and her ankles, maybe some more coverage there as well, and also her shoulders need some filling in, and the underside of her arms.
I’ll be frank here, I do not like this. The nuvaboobs are out of place, and I really dislike the use of the rahkshi head with that chain hair. Her limbs are strangely blobbish and don’t look very stable.
in all seriousness, I said that due to feeling like a right jerk for that last coment. trust me, I come here from mocpages, stomping ground of hawkflight (steven). I can take criticism.
People don’t like the “Nuva Rahkshi boobs” because it makes every single moc that uses that arrangement of parts seem like a recolor of BioRockDude’s female mocs. It just seems really overdone and is difficult to pull off without looking generic.
Out of the context of the internet, it’s totally alright(there’s no fundamental flaws with those design choices… usually) and it may even stick out to you among your mocs. However, when you introduce it to the community, it just seems like a tired trope. For many, it’s just like seeing the same moc built by different people, and therefore not being impressive in the slightest. It can be done well, but you kind of need something else to make your moc stick out.
That said, I’m just not getting any of that here. The colorscheme’s kind of neat, and the tail is there, but… She just looks generic otherwise.
What I’d do is try to create something that defines her as a character and integrate that into the build. Something you haven’t seen done before.
