Please leave thoughts and criticism!
Size comparison:
Custom Torso:
https://www.reddit.com/r/bioniclelego/comments/j1gq22/so_i_made_my_first_original_custom_torso_in_a/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf
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well before I can, I need to know at least a little bit about this character, namely gender.
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how did you fit the stars hau onto the metru head?
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It just fits.
@Hawkflight she’s female.
guessed as much, what with the nuvaboobs at all, but there’s male MOCs with them as well.
In my opinion, this moc just doesn’t have much interesting going for it. White and red is a cool color scheme in concept; with some more effort put into it (and not broken up the black and grey structure). She’s got a few design elements like the pridak talon wings jetpack that aren’t really acknowledged anywhere else on the build, as well. On a technical level, you’ve got a generally smooth build, which means the Nuvaboobs actually fit the aesthetic, though that’s not consistent in the shins and feet. The waist joint means that the armoring in the torso is broken up, and a lot of technic gets exposed.
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Yeah, I’m still going to tinker with the torso design, given that it’s the first time I’ve done an inika sized custom torso with a waist joint.
And I definitely understand your point with the shins.
Good concept, colour and use of the pridak blades. As mentioned by others the transition from upper chest to waist to legs is a bit jarring. Maybe do custom longer thighs and make the body shorter?
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The shoulder connection puts a bit of stress on the pieces because I can see it bending.
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Good point; you might be able to fix it by adding a a 1x3 half width beam or the wider “coathanger” piece.
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Could almost pass for a Pridak revamp. The torso is my biggest beef. The waist area is a little exposed, and as a whole the torso is too long for me. The wings could be a really nice addition though.
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Thanks! I might reword it into a Pridak revamp, but not sure.