New Story - Any Interest?

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Ah yes the atomization of a child.

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Greg blog let’s goooooo

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It’s a very compelling hook to read further. Really good.

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Yay. NSAI continues again. Thank you Gregory.

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NSAI?

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I believe it means New Story - Any Interest.

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Splendid! Rather splendid!

While as an old “LEGO BIONICLE” fan I have to confess that nothing, not even the canon contests, beats new “LEGO BIONICLE” story content, I have to say I’m already hooked into this new adventure! The story and characterization is rich and exciting and I can’t wait to see where you’re taking the adventures of Kogar the Cougar and his colourful accomplices!

I, for one, can already say that I’m already a NSAI fan.

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Love this!!! Is the title still undecided?

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People nowadays never read before asking questions do they. The title is NSAI.

But yeah, I’m memeing. I liked the Prologue, it added a good bit to the atmosphere of the first chapter, I think!

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NSAI sounds very cool. As this seems to be some kind of scifi, maybe the AI stands for artificial intelligence? And like Bionicle meant “biological chronicle” maybe this one is a neurological saga? Neuraga for short. So NSAI might mean Neuraga/AI. Just a theory.

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The prologue was great! Shocking at the end, very evocative description. And a lot of nice worldbuilding here.

With both the prologue and the first chapter, it feels very character-focused and has a lot of “humanity” (still not sure whether or not the characters are human), which is great.

As someone who loves your writing and loves the Bionicle story, the fact that this feels like a potential spiritual successor to Bionicle- similar appeal, but also an exciting original blank canvas- is super exciting.

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Very Interesting beginning, would love to learn more about this universe!

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I’ll always want to read what you’ve got to post. Excited for more hopefully

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Added a new chapter (sorry for the little bit of a delay). Shona is now officially my favorite character in the book, because she turned out completely different and way cooler than I originally thought she would and I love when that happens.

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yayyyy. love to see it. glad you are finding something to write that you seem to enjoy!

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the way this quote is phrased makes me extremely intrigued
argh I must know more

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Enthralling!!

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Okay, I’m REALLY digging this! Found myself very quickly hooked in, and one thing I love about your writing is how easily it just drags me in as a reader. Its flow is very smooth and once I start reading, I just keep on reading and reading and need to make myself stop. Kogar and Shona are cool, and I want to see more of Namil; And this was a very effective prologue. That bit with Mina imagining the bone as a pretty rock, only to realize otherwise, was some nice characterization; And I love the little joke of Namil considering ending it all if his shop was gone. All in a very solid headstart and I’d love to see more!

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New chapter is great! What’s captivating about Shona is that she embodies the entire spectrum of plants, “harvest and blight”, good and evil, etc. Very evocative descriptions. And it also feels fresh because plant powers were something that weren’t explored as much in Bionicle. Awesome stuff!

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Hey, we love your work, Greg. For your new stories and your old, thank you.

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