Nuvin is a Chronicler who goes into battles to record it head on
It’s way too skinny. Any bulk you could add at all would be good. .
The shoulder connections are awful. Even a bushing on each side would improve it, but it would still look awkward.
The lower arms and legs are extremely awkward. Those pieces are molded so that they already have elbows and knees, so using them below the actual elbow or knee just makes it look like he’s broken his arms and legs.
The hips are weird too. Like, the open sockets are bad, but it’s the fact that the pieces extend so far outwards that really gets me, especially when the thing’s so skinny.
Finally, the weapons. Now, the daggers and shield I have no problem with. But what is the Skakdi foot doing? I’ve looked at it in every way and I can’t tell what it’s supposed to be.
Overall, I still say you’ve got some potential, but this isn’t very good.
The Skakdi Foot is the back of a Croniclers Tablet Which he records the deaths and Weapons used
That can be be a good idea for the story thanks
I would give this MOC a 3/10.
The proportions are horrendous, that is really what killed this MOC. It has four knees, four elbows, a limited amount of poseability, hips booming from the side, and so on and so forth. The MOC needs a lot of work, but it is fixable. I am Sorry if I came off too hard.
Needs Alot of Work
This looks like Pohatu Mata with the really wide hips
And surprisingly this is a really creative MOC.