I’m not much for non-anthropomorphic MOCs, but right off the bat I can say the he looks way too skeletal.
His long, protruding neck, awkward technic torso design and overall skinny look doesn’t get the point across well that it’s luxray.
Although, I will say that the way you made his eyes and his tail tuft is rather creative. I also liked your use of the LoSS leg pieces.
If I were to give any suggestions it would be to simply flesh his body out and make his neck shorter. His head doesn’t look like much of a mane, so I’d also recommend adding a bit more there too.
Overall, just make him bigger.
I would still appreciate some feedback on this version. Also I am considering completely redoing the head, as that is the piece I am least happy with…
…One more thing though, Missingno is on the way for @helryx…
Aye, he looks a lot more organic now. If I were to give any additional suggestions, it’d be to try to make his torso a bit heftier, add some substance. Overall though, he looks pretty great right now and resembles Luxray quite a bit. Keep up the good work, mate.
So before I get to the giant silly wall of text and Images explaining this extraordinarily strange interpretation of a pokemon, it is just an interpretation, I have made it this way because the source material isn’t much to go off of…
…I now summon the great @nekroz to Judge this, because he asked for it, and yeah, onto the thing…
…What’s that I here you saying, thats just a picture bluetacked onto an armor piece and well yes. However this MOC or Kronkiwongi or whatever you wanna call it is Missingno, a tangled mass of corruption, constantly fighting itself…
It looks more like a squid than missingno. Maybe make it taller with out the whole spread out thing going on. If you do that you could take the picture off, but that’s up to you. Over all, not bad!
