Rhok Xen, the Titan of Earth

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So I’m new to this whole moc thing but I’ve always had a love for bionicle!!! Onua was always one of my favorite characters and when I saw the journey to one I fell in love with the figure well rather his power and color scheme!! So I decided to get a few bionicle sets and try my hand at making a figure that embodied strength and power and as I was building I didn’t want to just make a beefy version onua as I have seen that done before on venoms moc Spotlight so I decided I wanted to make a humanoid animal and my first thought was a rhino now he is named Rhok Xen (Rock Shen) he is a massive Titan with the same powers of earth manipulation as onua but I tried to create my own backstory but That is still in the works but I really hope you all like my best attempt at a large moc

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So I was told that his hips were too gappy so based on that I filled him in just to make it less gappy also thank you saxton for the idea to change u the lower arms o will do so when I can get ahold of some better parts but for now I’m happy with the way he looks

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Last one but I cleaned up his legs his arms and torso was modified slightly thoughts please

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So I’ve been sorta tinkering with Rhok Xen body to make it look cleaner and more sculpted and it’s taken a month but I think that I have finally gotten him to a point where I think his color scheme and overall distribution of colors is much better than it was. I would like to thank everyone who gave creative criticism on him because you all definitely helped with him so please do note that I will still accept any criticism but please enjoy my creation!!!
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Looks good, but the feet are a bit small for my taste.

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I’ll do a size comparison soon

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Looks cool

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Thank you :slight_smile:

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I’d like to see more pics,but the MOC seems awesome

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Hey Kevin, try to keep all the updates in one post, OK? We have an edit button for you to do that.

Double, triple, quadruple, etc. posting is against the rules.

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Sorry about that

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Man thats a really awesome Moc you’ve got there.

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Cool. thats all i have to say.

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Hang on, did you say you were new to MOCing? This looks better than most first, second, or third MOCs out there. If I had one thing to say, it’s that the hips are a little gap-y

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It’s my first moc I’ve just altered it a few times is all this is just its current version

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Oh, okay. You’ve put some real effort into him!

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Thanks it’s taken roughly 6 months lol

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Whoa!

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Brilliantly executed for what parts you seem to have used here, maybe just work on he lower arms some more, they seem a tad sloppy.

But otherwise this looks great.

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Epic. Just… wow. That MOC is massive, and the build is impressive. If this were a set, I’d buy two.

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You sure? Cause this is one of the best mocs I’ve seen in recent time.

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Yes this was my first moc but it is not the first version

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He has no face ._.

I will say I quite like the colors though.

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