Rising Star (Story Serial Continuation Project)

Oh, huh, forgot that was originally part of it. I must’ve posted the old story before I changed that part. I never had an explanation for that Toa, and I later rewrote it to be a floating red orb (no Toa involved). That way, it seemed like it could be some sort of force of nature, some ‘natural’ supernatural occurrence that messed with time.

It still isn’t necessarily canon, but I may post the updated version, just in case anyone else reads it and gets confused. (by “updated” I mean entirely the same except minus one toa and staff and plus one orb, I never rewrote any other parts)

Thanks for pointing that out, I’d totally forgotten about it.

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To be honest, I think it works better as a Toa with a staff than as a force of nature. The Matoran selected, and the times they were taken from, seem too convenient to be random.

Maybe it was someone trying to prevent Matoro’s sacrifice? (Even though this would have been in vain, since we all know you can’t change the timeline)

It wasn’t entirely a coincidence.

Long-winded explanation for a five-year-old story

The explanation I had at the time was that it was the inverse of Kopeke’s original speculation: It came from Kopeke’s time, and pulled him out first. Then, it pulls out Ihu. Then, the universe recognizes something isn’t right, and the orb’s path gets reset. This time, it pulls out Kopeke, Ihu, and Talvi, as Talvi is affected by the removal of Ihu. Reset once more, this time Matoro gets removed. After that… who knows what might’ve happened, as literally everyone would be affected by Matoro’s removal.

So yes, there is a version of events where it’s just Ihu and Kopeke, and another where it’s just Ihu, Talvi, and Kopeke. In both of those, they didn’t fix the problem before the reset, as Matoro’s help was crucial. None of them remember those versions of events.

It is a coincidence that Matoro got pulled out from a moment when he was with Kopeke, and that does lead Kopeke to the wrong conclusion. But that’s the only real coincidence

Anyway, that’s the old explanation. I do have some ideas for this story involving the mask of time that might explain Ihu’s vision of the future; I don’t know for sure if I’ll go that route yet.

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Chapter 6

1001 years before the arrival of Kopaka and Pohatu…

If you asked Ivohku how he died, there was little he could tell you. He knew nothing about the lithe green female that had attacked him, or why she had targeted him. He knew that she was extremely acrobatic, and also apparently knew about him. She’d initially caught him by surprise, but when he got a second to think, he erased the gravity around her, as he usually did with his enemies. But she had been expecting that, and unlike past opponent, knew how to fight in zero gravity. And before he knew it, he found a dagger in his chest.

Regardless, he’d died. And now he was stuck here, in these featureless hallways with those little Kestora running everything. And they said he couldn’t leave! Apparently, they’d been saying that for years, that there was some sort of problem.

Ivohku couldn’t just stay here and wait. He had people to protect, a home to watch over. He desperately wanted to know what that green figure had been up to, and why she’d kill him. Either the Kestora couldn’t fix whatever the problem was, or they were keeping people here on purpose. Either way, it was for someone else to be running things. Ivohku had gathered up as many Toa as he could, and led them in a coup against the Kestora.

It didn’t go so well…


Now…

Ruhko muttered something under his breath. “Those are the Toa the Kestora have taken control of. They must be coming here for you. We need to get out of here.”

“You don’t think we can handle a few Toa?” Pohatu said.

“There’s easily over fifty Toa out there,” Kopaka said. “We’re good, but not that good.”

“Of course,” Pohatu muttered. “All right, everyone get ready to --”

“No!” Quilha exclaimed. “You go the wrong way, you could lead us into a trap. Follow my lead.”

“I can just–” Pohatu started to say.

“I know my way around here; you don’t,” Quilha snapped. “So unless you want to wind up as mindless slaves like those Toa that are coming after you right now, I’d suggest you listen.” Pohatu was too stunned to speak; he’d rarely been told off by a Matoran like that before.

“This way,” Quilha said, walking down the tunnel. “We need to get you to old grey. He’ll know how to hide you from the Kestora’s eyes.”

“All right,” Pohatu said. “Then what? Who’s this Hydraxon fellow Ihu said we need to find?”

“Do Toa usually rely upon the crazed ramblings of mentally broken Matoran to save the day?” Quilha said.

“Well, I don’t hear any better ideas from you,” Pohatu muttered.

“All right, let’s say Hydraxon is someone up here,” Quilha said. “Do you even know what he looks like?”

Kopaka thought for a moment. He knew for sure that he’d heard the name Hydraxon somewhere, perhaps even met Hydraxon, but the memory escaped him. “I’m not sure…”

“I know what he looks like.”

Quilha stared at Mavrah, surprised. “You do?”

“I didn’t remember it at first, but I met him shortly after I got here. He… he saved me from some maniac Matoran that attacked me in the far Star-south sector.” Mavrah shuddered. “Then he… he killed the Matoran that attacked me. It was horrible to watch…”

“Great,” Quilha said. “So we’re looking for a guy that kills Matoran. And we don’t even know why we’re looking for him.”

“Would you know him if you saw him?” Kopaka asked.

“Probably?” Mavrah said.

“Then look,” Kopaka said, sharing his mask power with the Onu-Matoran.

“As long as you do it while we walk,” Quilha said. Ruhko grabbed Mavrah’s hand to guide him, while the Onu-Matoran looked through the Red Star.

Glancing about the Star, Mavrah saw many things that might have traumatized another Matoran. But Mavrah had seen worse, much worse, in his time on the Star.

And then, he saw something familiar. “There! I see him. I see Hydraxon.” Mavrah frowned. “He’s doing something to one of the Toa…”

“Wait, he’s with the enemy Toa?” Quilha said.

“Not exactly; he’s in a lab near the Toa horde. Looks like he’s captured one or something. The rest of the Toa are between us and him.”

“Well, we certainly can’t go back,” Quilha said. “We’ll have to find another way.”

“We could just go through them,” Pohatu suggested. “These walls might block my mask power somewhere, but we can probably still run through regular old Toa. We’ll be past them before they even–”

Quilha stopped walking, turned, and stared at the Toa of Stone. “Is your speed your answer to every problem?”

Pohatu shrugged. “It tends to work for me most of the time.”

“Well, how about using your head for once,” Quilha said. “The Kestora have no powers of their own. How do you think they got control of all the Toa here? You think that maybe they might be able to negate your powers? Or perhaps they’ve equipped the Toa with armor that blocks your speed just as the walls of this place do.”

“Well, then what do you suggest?” Pohatu shot back. “That we wait for Hydraxon to come over here? Or we just continue to hide from the Kestora forever? I thought Ruhko said you guys wanted to beat the Kestora?”

“We beat our enemies by out-smarting them, not throwing power at our problems and hoping it works,” Quilha said. “That’s something you Toa don’t seem to–”

“Enough!” Ruhko snapped. “Arguing isn’t going to get us anywhere. Quilha, I don’t know what your problem is with these Toa, but you need to recognize that they intend to help, and also that they just got here. And Toa, you would do well to recognize this as well. Quilha does have a point: you’ve been here for maybe an hour. We’ve been up here for centuries.”

“And perhaps we would all benefit from looking at things from a different point of view,” Kopaka added. “For example, I’ve already found what I believe to be a way around the enemy’s Toa to get where we need to go. Of course, Pohatu and I don’t know what parts of this star are safe and what parts aren’t, so we’ll need your help to get there.”

“Wait, are we going for Hydraxon?” Quilha said. “I thought we were going to get you hidden from the Kestora?”

Ruhko nodded. “Now that we know how to find Hydraxon, we can always find him again, once the Kestora can’t find you. On the other hand, if we wait too long, the Kestora and their Toa will get to us.”

Kopaka turned to glance ahead, deactivating his mask power as he did so. In that second, something caught his eye, and he frowned, reactivating the mask. Up ahead, he saw a pair of Turaga. One he didn’t recognize, but the other…

“Is that… Lhikan?”


“You can open your eyes now.”

Ivohku opened his eyes and glanced around. He was lying on a bed in one of the revival chambers. Sitting next to him was a silver warrior he didn’t recognize.

He groaned and sat up. His head was still hazy. “Wh… where am I? What happened?”

“You were under the Kestora’s control,” the silver armored warrior said. He held up a small device. “Had this planted on the back of your head, turned you into some kind of mindless drone. But I’ve freed you.”

“You… saved me?” the Toa said. The last thing he remembered… he remembered running into one of the small purple ones, and it had some sort of machine that messed up his powers, and then…

“Yeah, I freed you,” Hydraxon said. “And now, I need your help to capture the others, so that we can save them, too.”

Ivohku was still confused. “What’s… what’s going on here?”

“I don’t really know,” Hydraxon said. “But I know one thing: the Kestora are our enemy.” Hydraxon held up a large blaster. “And they need to go down.”


Author’s notes: Kopaka has some of his memories from his time in Karda Nui, enough to recognize the name Hydraxon, but not remember who he is. Tahu would know, but he isn’t here.
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Great as always.

I really like the way you wrote Pohatu and his interactions with the Matoran. He’s my favourite character, and he’s absolutely in character here.

Chapter 7

Toa Lhikan.

His name alone brought a flood of emotion to Quilha. She remembered the team of Toa who had defended Metru Nui, all those years ago. She remembered the Toa she had once looked up to… and then, the one Toa that had changed everything.

But Lhikan wasn’t to blame for that; she knew that much. Mavrah had told her what happened after she had died, or at least what he knew of the story, which wasn’t much. He’d told her that Lhikan had died, or so he’d heard. She’d never seen him up here, although both she and Mavrah had looked. But now, it seemed the Toa had…

“You sure it’s him?” Pohatu asked.

“How many red and gold Turaga with a Hau do you know?” Kopaka answered.

Pohatu shrugged. “Not many. But I know a shapeshifter or two. And didn’t Ihu say to beware of Makuta, or some such?”

“Point taken.” Kopaka said. “There’s someone else with him, a grey Turaga.”
“That would be the guy we’re looking for,” Ruhko said. “He’s a Turaga of Magnetism. Knows a few tricks.”

“There’s something else,” Kopaka went on. “A vicious looking creature, green, with six arms, prowling around near them. Looks like it’s hunting for them.”

“Great, one big green guy,” Pohatu said. “We can take him, right?”

“It might be better if we could get this grey Turaga first,” Kopaka said. “That means getting past the big guy, getting the Turaga, and getting back here. And doing it quickly.” The Toa Nuva of Ice glanced at Pohatu.

“Well, all you had to do was ask,” Pohatu said, just before he dissapeared.


“She’s still out there,” Lhikan muttered.

The grey-armored Turaga next to him shook his head. “W-w-what did you – did you do to this creature, anyway, make her so – so mad?”

“She tried to kill me, back when I was still a Matoran,” Lhikan said. “Dume and his team barely saved me back then. Well, shortly after I got here, and she found out I was still alive… sorta… she intends to finish the job.”

“Wow,” the other Turaga said. “So she isn’t – she was – she was always mad, wanted to kill you? Wasn’t – wasn’t broken by d-d-death?”

Lhikan nodded. “If anything, it made her worse. We need to move. Eventually, she’s going to–”

Whatever the Turaga was going to say was cut off by the abrupt appearace of an orange-armored Toa in front of them, causing both Turaga to jump. “Hey guys,” the Toa said, holding out his hand. “Need a ride?”


Even though she was expecting his return, Quilha still jumped when she saw Pohatu blink back into existence, two Turaga in tow. “Two Toa, as requested,” he said. “No need to pay me, though it would be–”

“Quilha?” the red Turaga said suddenly. “Is that you?”

"You… know me? she said, surprised. And then, it hit her. There was only one reason that Lhikan would possibly know who she was. She opened her mouth to stop him from saying it, but she was too late.

“Of course I remember you. You were the last of Toa Tuyet’s victims.”

Suddenly, all eyes were on Quilha. She wanted to shrink away, to hide. Of course Lhikan would blow that out in the open; she should have seen it coming.

“Wait,” Pohatu said. “Did he say… Toa? You were killed by a Toa?”

“I get it now,” Ruhko said. “I’ve been wondering why you’ve been at these Toa’s throats since they showed up. Now I understand. Some Toa killed you too, and now you’re taking it out on these Toa here.”

“No!” Quilha snapped. “I just… I recognize that Toa aren’t these paragons of virtue that other Matoran see them as. They aren’t perfect. They’re no different than us, except they have powers and stuff.” She glared daggers at Lhikan. “Anything else you care to tell everyone about me?”

The Turaga held his hands up, taking a step back. “I’m sorry. I didn’t know you were hiding it…”

“That’s the other problem with Toa,” she snapped. “They don’t always know everything, but they think that their power gives them the right to do as they please.” Her mind flashed back to her death. “And sometimes, be it by accident or on purpose, they hurt the Matoran they’re supposed to protect.”

“Well, if it makes you feel any better, Tuyet has been… dealt with,” Lhikan said.

“Yeah, Mavrah told me,” Quilha said. “I’m so comforted, trust me.”

There was a long moment of awkward silence, finally broken by Pohatu. “So, uh, I guess we all know Lhikan, but who’s the other Turaga here?”

“I – I am – my name was – call me Grey,” the grey Turaga stammered. “Don’t – don’t remember the name I – I had, back then, you know?”

Pohatu looked at Ruhko. “You sure this is the guy we’re after?”

“Yes,” Ruhko said. “Sure, his head’s a little messed up – apparently, his brain was damaged in his death, some sort of earthquake or something – but he’s still as sharp as ever. And he’s figured out some stuff about the way the Kestora watch us, some that impresses even me.”

“M-m-mix of intuition and luck,” the Turaga stammered. “They – they scan the star, the halls. Some sort of – kind of bio-scan. It t-t-turns out the right frequency – wave of magnetics, can-can stop their scan, can hide you.” The Turaga reached up and touched Pohatu’s back, and he felt a jolt go through him, almost as if he’d been shocked. Then the Turaga did the same with Kopaka.

“There,” he said. “You are-are-are hidden now.”

“Really?” Pohatu said. “It’s that easy?”

“Well, it’s t-t-temporary,” the Turaga added. “Will fade-- will wear off, eventually, soon, and I’ll n-need to do it again, but until then, you – the Kestora cannot see you, unless you – unless you see them.” The Turaga did the same for the three Matoran and Lhikan.

“Trust me,” Ruhko said. “There’s sections of the Star that Quilha has only been able to get to because of…” Ruhko drifted off as he glanced at Quilha, who was staring at the wall, away from the rest of the group, and had been strangely silent the past few minutes.

Pohatu noticed the Ga-Matoran’s sudden standoffishness. “Quilha, look, I’m sorry if–”

Whatever Pohatu was about to say was cut off by a very loud screech, echoing down the hall. “What on Mata Nui was that?” Pohatu said.

“Well, the Kestora might not know where we are,” Kopaka said. “But the big green one does. Because it’s heading right toward us, fast.”


Author’s notes: It was tough figuring out how much Mavrah should know. He might be a bit self-contained in his work, but I would imagine word of three Matoran murders would get around. All Mavrah heard, though, is that Lhikan and Nidhiki dealt with the culprits (he probably heard that it was the Dark Hunters, though Quilha knows better). Lhikan knows Tuyet disappeared from custody, but doesn’t know what happened to her either, and apparently doesn’t care to share that particular detail.
Mavrah did hear about Lhikan’s death from the Toa Metru. Now, of course, he didn’t believe it at the time; I still think he doesn’t, but he at least mentioned the possibility to Quilha at some point.
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So Pohatu. :grinning:

Now we have Toa with a name for each element, but Plasma and The Green Jungle.
Is there any particular reason, why Jovan is stuttering?
Also “Grey” really sounds like it is Triglax.
Both chapters are awesome of course.

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I realized that too, but it was totally unintentional; Quilha tends to call people by traits, and I’ve often described Jovan as a ‘grey Turaga’, so it seemed the most natural thing for them to call him.

That will be explained in a later chapter.

Speaking of which…


Chapter 8

I can smell him.

The Turaga, he’s not far. There are others with him, too; one of them must have helped him escape. Probably Toa. Toa always get in the way of a good hunt, even in this wretched place.

Hmm… you know, it’s been a long time since I’ve fought a Toa. Usually, that annoying little one gets all the Toa here. The Turaga will probably tell them not to fight me, but Toa never listen. Perhaps we’ll fight.

Yes… perhaps I’ll get to hunt a Toa today.


Kopaka and Pohatu might have been hidden from the Kestora, but there was one being they couldn’t hide from so easily: Delara. His enhanced hearing allowed him to hear almost everything on the Star, but it was difficult to parse it all out, to find a certain sound in the cacophony of it all.

He needed to find these two “Toa”. They claimed to be Toa, but they didn’t follow the Code. They were pretenders, the worst kind of Toa. That put them at the top of the list of his targets.

After all, that was what the Toa Code said: Toa must kill.


“Darn it!” Makuta snapped, seeing the two Toa disappear. They were so close…

Were they gone from the Star? Or had they found some way to hide from the Kestora? Makuta knew how Toa worked; they wouldn’t just leave, not by choice. If there was even a chance that the Toa were still here…

Makuta turned to the Toa, and declared, “keep marching to the Toa’s last known location.” Obediently, the Toa horde resumed their march…


Hydraxon frowned. The Toa’s last known location? Were there other Toa here, that the Kestora didn’t have under their control?

If that were the case, Hydraxon had to get to them first. Either they could help him against the Kestora; or, if they refused, he would make sure that the Kestora couldn’t take them. Why let his enemy have another pawn?

Luckily, the Toa Horde wasn’t moving very fast. It seemed that the Kestora’s control couldn’t get them to run. But Hydraxon and his new Toa ally could, and they began to sprint down a darkened passageway, one that hopefully would bring them ahead of the Kestora.


“We should probably go,” Ruhko said.

“You know what, forget it,” Pohatu said. “We can’t run forever. I say we fight whatever’s coming.”

“It took two teams of Toa to bring down the Xutohki the first time,” Lhikan said. “You two won’t stand a chance.”

“Well, we’re Toa Nuva…” Pohatu pointed out.

“We’re also on a mission,” Quilha said. “Hey, icey, you still see Hydraxon?”

Kopaka looked around for a moment. “Yes. He’s not far, but he’s on the move, running. Unfortunately, the Kestora’s Toa are about to be cut off our best route to him, so we need to move fast.”

“I can do fast,” Pohatu offered.

“A – a w-w-wise warrior knows when to – when to fight and when to – to run,” the grey Turaga stammered.

“He’s right,” Lhikan agreed. “Even if you can win this fight, what happens if your enemies get to this Hydraxon before you do?”

“I am getting really tired of running away,” Pohatu said.

“Well, we’re getting tired of being stuck here,” Quilha retorted. “I guess none of us are happy here.”

“When we get out of here, I am going to go find someone I can hit,” Pohatu said. “Say, that reminds me, we still need to find whoever killed Tren Krom and Karzahni…”

“Wait, did you say someone killed Karzahni?” Ruhko said.

Pohatu had opened his mouth to answer, but Kopaka cut him off. “Story time later. Leaving time now.”

“Right,” Pohatu said. “Everyone, prepare for the Pohatu express.” His mask activated, and the group took off running through the halls, finally stopping in front of another door.

“Quilha, you’re up,” Ruhko said. Quilha immediately approached the door, pulling out her tools, and began fiddling with the mechanism.

It rapidly became apparent that this would not be easy. Somehow, this door had been damaged, and the mechanism was stuck. “This might take a minute,” she grumbled.

“We might not have a minute,” Kopaka said.

“Maybe we can–” Pohatu started.

“No,” Quilha said quickly.

“With our powers, we might be able to–”

“I said no!” she snapped, dropping her tools and turning to the Toa of Stone. “This is my work. I am not going to have a Toa who doesn’t know what they’re doing ruin things.”

Her harsh outburst shocked everyone into silence. Everyone, that is, except for one member of the group.

“All right, I’ve had enough of this,” Mavrah said, stepping forward. "I kept quiet when you were being a jerk to the Toa. I kept quiet when you were questioning everything they said and did. I kept quiet when you argued with them over every little thing. But now you’re taking this too far.

“You’re still so hung up against these Toa, just because of what some other Toa did years ago. You say you see the Toa differently than other Matoran, that’s for sure.” Mavrah took another step forward. “Most Matoran might see Toa as paragons of virtue who can do no wrong, but you’re even worse; you see all Toa as terrible people who can do no good, and ignore the heroes who are right in front of your eyes.” He took another step forward, and Quilha took a step back instinctively. “They’re trying to help save us all. Why don’t you try letting them for once?”

Mavrah turned to the Toa. “Now. What is it you want to do?”

“Well, these walls block my mask power,” Pohatu said, “but maybe, if we combine my speed with Kopaka’s ice power, it can–”

“Then try it,” Mavrah said. “Don’t just stand there talking. We’ve done enough of that.”

Pohatu nodded. “Kopaka, think you can make this door vibrate slower?”

The Ice Toa held his hand up against the door, his mask power allowing him to see the broken mechanism. Then, Pohatu’s mask power, shared with him, allowed him to reach into the door.

Immediately, he felt the door try to push him back. Activating his ice power, he supercooled the door, slowing down its vibrations as it tried to kick him out. Now came a furious tug of war, as the door tried to adjust its vibrations to push him out and he constantly changed his vibrations to match it. It tried heating itself, but Kopaka kept cooling it, again and again. It was agonizingly painful, frustratingly slow, to push his hand further into the door, but he wasn’t going to let that stop him. Gritting his teeth, he grabbed the mechanism, careful not to supercool it lest he pass through it too, and pulled it into place.

The door clicked and started to swing open. Kopaka quickly pulled his hand out, shaking it. “All right, let’s go,” he said.

As the group began to move, Lhikan looked at Mavrah. “That was quite the speech,” he said. “Where did that come from?”

“I… know what it’s like to clash with Toa over misunderstandings,” Mavrah said. “I… I guess I don’t want to see Quilha end up like I did.”


Author’s notes: The door scene is something I had in mind since I came up with the walls blocking Pohatu’s power. One of my favorite things to write is coming up with creative uses of powers. Also, I’m sure that stunt won’t have any consequences that will come back to bite our two Toa…
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I love the creative use of powers.

I also really like how every single named character was at least mentioned by description in the official canon.

Every one except Ruhko, that is.

Or is he going to turn out to be one of the Ghosts that experimented on Gaardus or something?

If Kopaka can vibrate through the door itself, and then grab the mechanism, then mecanism should vibrate with different frequency. It could be done if Kopaka supercooled everything, but not the mechanism. Don’t know if this is super science-accurate, but I think that such a clarification (or a different one) should be added to the scene.
And creative usage of powers is one of the coolest things about powers at all.

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Good point. Added a line about him being careful not to supercool the mechanism (or at least the part he needs to move)

I had it in my head that he was one of the Ghosts who created/sabotaged the Fohrok.

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I was very busy last night, and by the time I could post a chapter, I was too tired.

But better late than never, right?


Chapter 9

Hydraxon moved as swiftly as he could through the darkened corridor. Ordinarily, he would have been running full speed, but his leg was still damaged, and Ivohku wouldn’t have been able to keep up with him at that rate anyway.

Then, suddenly, a group of shadows appeared in their path. Hydraxon couldn’t see who they were, but he readied his weapons. “Step aside,” he said, “or be destroyed.”

“Woah, hold up, no destroying,” one of the shadows said, stepping forward. Hydraxon got a better look at him, and realized it was a Toa. “You are the ones the Kestora hunt?”

“I guess so,” the Toa said, raising his hands. “Are you Hydraxon?”

“What’s it to you?” Hydraxon growled, holding his weapons ready.

“We were told to find you, by Ihu,” the Toa said. “He said you could help us leave this place.”

“I know no Ihu,” Hydraxon said. “And I know no way to leave. Though I intend to force the Kestora to tell me.”

“I don’t think the Kestora know either.” This came from a Fe-Matoran, walking out of the shadows. “But I intend to fix that for them.”

“You intend to fix–?” Hydraxon said. “Who are you?”

“I am Ruhko,” the Fe-Matoran said. “These are my allies, Quilha and Mavrah, the grey Turaga and Lhikan, and the Toa, Kopaka and Pohatu–”

“Toa Nuva Kopaka and Pohatu, at your service,” the orange armored Toa said.

“Pohatu? Kopaka?” the names stirred a memory in Hydraxon’s mind. He’d met these two Toa before, not on the Star, but before that. He’d trained them for…

Suddenly, it started coming back to him. For so long, his memories had been barred from him, but now the sight of these Toa cracked down the walls of his memory. He was a member of the Order of Mata Nui, and he’d trained these Toa when they first came into being. Then, he’d sent them to–

His reminiscing was cut off by a bright flash of light, as the lights overhead suddenly flared brightly. Then they dimmed, allowing him to see… an army of Toa, standing right on the other side of Kopaka and Pohatu’s group. And at the head of this group was a lone Kestora, holding a staff with a glowing red orb.

“Well,” the Kestora said, looking at Hydraxon. “The two rogue Toa, and the Roduhki, with the Toa that he stole, all in one place? All our problems will end here.”

Roduhki… that was what some people called Hydraxon. Was it the name of his species or something. “Kestora,” he said. “You’re about to have a lot more than two problems.” Hydraxon knew that there was no way to beat this many Toa, but he wasn’t about to go down without a fight.

“We’re about to have a lot less, actually,” the Kestora said. “In fact… perhaps these two Toa can tell us why no one can leave.”

“Perhaps you can tell us, Kestora,” Ruhko said. “After all, isn’t that your job?”

“Our job is to maintain order,” the Kestora said. “Everyone goes where they belong. But the Toa refused to allow things be. Thus, they now serve Makuta.”

“Makuta?” Pohatu said. “Is he here? You know, you can’t trust him; they don’t call him the ‘master of shadows’ for --”

“I am Makuta,” the Kestora declared. “Leader of the Kestora, placed in charge of the Star by–”

“Waitwaitwait,” Pohatu said. “You’re Makuta? And you’re… a Kestora?”

“Yes, that is what I said. I was put in charge of the star by the Great Being–”

“So you’re telling me this whole time we’ve been worried about a Makuta, and it’s just a little Kestora?” Pohatu said. “That’s… almost disappointing.”

“Enough talk,” the Kestora said. “Toa of Makuta, capture these disorderous beings!” She raised her staff, and the red orb glowed brighter. The Toa horde began to advance.

“We need to get out of here,” Pohatu said.

“Wait, I know how to get out of here,” Hydraxon said. Then he blinked. Why had he said that? There was another memory, something about someone who could go anywhere…

“As do I,” Pohatu said. “Everyone, get ready to run.”

Hydraxon didn’t hear Pohatu. He was wracking his brain. The last time he’d seen the Toa, they’d left with a teleporter. Someone who could go anywhere… call his name and he came… what was his name? And then, at last, it came to him.

“Botar!” he cried. “We need your help!”


Across the Star, Botar heard Hydraxon’s call in his head.

He’d felt a few cries like this for a while after he died, but then they’d slowly come to a stop. But this one felt near – and urgent. Botar had to get to Hydraxon right now, but how–

And then, abruptly, he found himself face-to-face with another warrior. Botar stumbled back, startled. “What…?”

“Botar?” the warrior – Hydraxon – said, looking over Botar’s heavily damaged body. “What the Karzahni happened to you?”

“How – how did I get here?” Botar stammered.

“You teleported?” Hydraxon said. “That’s what you do.”

“I can do that?” Botar said. If only he’d remembered that before, he wouldn’t have been stuck here…

“Yeah, and we need you to do it again,” Hydraxon said. “We’ve got trouble.” He gestured behind him at the approaching horde of Toa.

“Right,” Botar said. “Um… everyone, take my hands.” He wasn’t sure if that was necessary, but he’d rather not leave anyone behind by accident because he couldn’t remember how his powers worked.

“TOA!”

Botar spun around. Down the other end of the hall was a large, green, six armed creature, each arm ending in wicked-looking claws, charging down the hall.

“Time to leave!” one of the Turaga called, grabbing Botar’s hand.

As everyone grabbed on, Botar focused. He focused on being somewhere else, anywhere else. There was only one location he could imagine clearly enough to focus on as he fought to remember how to use his powers…

And then, just as the green monster leapt toward him, energy began to coalesce around him… and then he was gone.


Author’s notes: Botar can’t teleport into Karda Nui, but he took the Toa to the entrance.
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It’s always good to see more canon characters making appearances.

I’m also curious as to where Botar’s going to take them. The only place I can think of would be Daxia, and, given that Makuta’s probably been dead for at least a few days, if not weeks, by this point, Daxia’s probably not going to be very livable. Interesting stuff.

Also, what’s up with the green six-armed thing? It it some reference to a canon creature I’m not aware of, or did you just want to introduce a new monster?

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It’s the same creature that was hunting Lhikan earlier; it’s the one new character in this story.

Yes, I am attentive-boring with details in books that I really like. My concern is, shouldn’t Hydraxon limp or something?

Pohatu’s reaction in this scene is my reaction on this scene.
For now there are a lot of things that do not really make sense (six-armed monster), but I believe they will in the next chapter. Looking forward to it.

Excellent point, I admit I forgot that detail. I assume he would’ve patched his leg up enough that he could move at least somewhat swiftly, but maybe not full speed. I edited the scene a bit to reflect that.

Chapter 10

In the seconds before Botar teleported, the Xutohki leapt toward them. Just as they began to warp away, one of her claws hit Kopaka’s shoulder armor, the smallest of contact… just enough for her to get pulled through space with them.

And then, as they reached their destination, she slammed into the group, scattering them across the room. The Matoran were knocked down, Ivohku was thrown backward and slammed into the wall, stunned.

Hydraxon slammed to the floor, holding his blades up, trying to keep the Xutohki’s claws and teeth at bay. Forcing his good leg between them, he kicked her away. She slammed against the wall, and immediately charged back in.

Kopaka raised his blade and tried to fire a blast of ice, but all that came was a small chill; he’d drained his powers too much earlier, supercooling the door.

The creature leapt toward Quilha, who was still on the floor. Lhikan stepped in the way, throwing his shield up. The creature slammed into the shield, and Lhikan stumbled back a few steps.

Then, the creature leapt over the Turaga and his shield, heading toward the grey Turaga. Before she could reach the Turaga, a club slammed into her stomach, and she gasped. Pohatu swung again, and she barely managed to dodge.

“You weren’t kidding about how strong this thing is, Turaga,” Pohatu said. “Let’s see if my stone’s stronger.” He held up his hand, and bands of stone appeared, binding the creature’s arms.

The Xutohki just laughed, flexing her muscles, and shattered the stone. Before Pohatu could react, she lashed out, slashing at the Toa’s head. His mask went flying as the claws raked against the side of his face, and he grunted in pain.

Kopaka leapt in, slamming his shield against the Xutohki’s chin. “Back off,” he growled. The Xutohki grabbed the Ice Toa’s shield with three of her claws, and flung him against the wall.

“Teleporty guy!” Quilha cried. “Can’t you get us out of here? Preferably without the monster?”

“I can’t!” Botar cried. He wasn’t sure how his powers worked, and he’d rather not leave anyone behind with this creature.

Ruhko aimed his Kestora blaster at the Xutohki, loosing a blast of lightning. The blast hit her dead center, and she stumbled, then turned to charge at him. Ruhko fired again and again, trying to keep her back. “Pohatu, get your mask and speed us out!”

“I’ve got it!” Mavrah called, running toward the Stone Toa’s mask. Grabbing it, he ran back toward the Toa, just as the Xutohki managed to get close enough to slash at Ruhko’s arm. The Kestora’s Lgihtning Blaster went flying, striking the wall with a loud crack; it wasn’t going to be of any use anymore. Then the creature bit onto Ruhko’s arm, her powerful jaws crushing through the armor, and he yelped in pain.

Kopaka swung his sword at the Xutohki, and it ducked aside. The Ice Toa swung again, this time managing to clip one of her left arms, and she screeched. “We can’t beat this thing!” he said. “Pohatu, we need to run!”

Mavrah tossed the Stone Toa his mask, and he caught it and put it back on. “For once, I agree with that idea,” he said.

Ivohku shook his head, coming to his senses, and saw the chaos that had erupted. He tried to raise his blade, then winced; apparently, his arm had been damaged when he’d been hurled against the wall. He raised his other arm, and increased gravity tenfold around the Xutohki; she slammed to the floor. “This ought to hold her.”

The Xutohki raised her head, and spat something; a glob of green smacked against the Toa’s mask, blocking his sight. Unable to see the creature, he lost focus on his powers, and she was able to crawl out of the gravity field, charging at Pohatu.

Pohatu winced as he swung his club at the creature. He’d seen something like that before, when a Nui-Jaga had temporarily blinded him; it seemed this Xutohki did something similar. “Someone grab him!”

Botar picked up the Toa of Gravity. The Xutohki leapt at him, but the grey Turaga leapt in the way and whacked her with his staff. Suddenly, her feet were magnetically pulled to the floor. The Turaga’s power wasn’t strong enough to stop her, but it could slow her down. “N-Now is our – our chance!” he called.

“Right,” Pohatu said, sharing the power of speed with everyone. As he did so, he began to feel a pain in the back of his head; he’d been using his mask power too much lately, especially with the stunt with the door. But he could do this; he had to.

They ran for only a second before Pohatu had to stop. Every millisecond he ran, the pain increased. “Can’t… keep running,” he gasped. “My mask’s… too drained.”

Kopaka looked around. “Looks like we’re far enough away, for now. Botar, where have you brought us? We seem to still be on the Star…”

“I brought you back to where I was before I came to you,” Botar said. “It was the only place I could think of.”

“Wait a second, you can go anywhere,” Hydraxon said. “You can get us all out of here. Get us off the Star.”

“Or…” Ruhko said, “You can get us to the send-back machine, so I can fix it, and then everyone can get out of here. Botar can get us past the defenses.”

“We just got away from the Kestora, and you want to go back?” Ivohku said.

“If-if we just leave – just go, there will still be – people will still get st-st-stuck here,” the grey Turaga stammered. “We need – have to --to solve the p-p-problem.”

Pohatu glanced at the Turaga. “Are you okay?” he said.

“He’s been like this since we found him,” Ruhko said. “As far as we can tell, he tried to free one of the Kestora’s captured Toa, and something went wrong. Scrambled his own brain, or something.”

“He’s got a point, though,” Kopaka said. “We can’t leave until we solve the problem. Wouldn’t be Toa if we did.”

An angry screech echoed down the hall. “Whatever we’re doing, I suggest we do it quickly,” Lhikan said.

“Right,” Botar said. “Does anyone know where this machine is?”

“I can show you, if we can get to my map room,” Ruhko said.

“Botar, you can go to places you haven’t been,” Hydraxon said. “So long as one of the people you’re teleporting knows where it is.” Seeing Botar again, Hydraxon was starting to remember how his compatriot’s powers worked.

“Right, right,” Botar said. He grabbed Ruhko’s hand, and saw the Fe-Matoran’s map room in his mind. And then… the whole group was there.

“Wow,” Pohatu said. “Who knew we’d go running all over the Star, just to come back here again?”

“Wait,” Quilha said. “Before we go to the Kestora, there’s… something I need to do.”

Everyone turned to look at her, and she shifted uncomfortably. A part of her wished she hadn’t spoken up; but no, she had to do this. She turned to look at Kopaka and Pohatu. “I’m… sorry,” she said. “I’ve been terrible to you this whole time you’ve been here. Without you, we would never have gotten this far. Here we are now, closer than we’ve ever been to getting out of here. You didn’t have to help us; you had every right to leave, with the way I was treating you… but you stayed. So, uh… thanks.”

“Of course we had to help,” Pohatu said. “Yeah, you’re right. We Toa aren’t perfect. But you know what? A good Toa, a good hero, admits to his or her mistakes, and keeps on trying.” Then, to her shock, he held out his fist. Quilha hesitated for a moment, before finally bumping hers against it.

“How very nice,” Hydraxon said. “Now then, can we continue with our goal?”

The entire group turned to look at him. “What? I’m just about done with this place. I’d rather have all the moments of personal growth and all that when we’re not on the Star.”

Ruhko pointed to a point on his maps. “This is where we need to go,” he said. “Can you get us there?”

Botar nodded. “Pretty sure I can, at least.”

Ruhko picked up another Kestora blaster off a nearby worktable, one of the ones Pohatu had taken earlier and left here. “Let’s go put an end to this Star’s problems.”


Author’s notes: Hewkii’s mask of Gravity was stated to make him pass out when he used it to hold up the coliseum, so this is how I interpret overuse of a mask power affecting a Toa. Of course, Kopaka could just use his own Kakama Nuva, if they need to run again, so I’m sure this won’t be an issue…
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Oh, we got rid of the green thing. What size it was actually? Like Lhikan could block it with his shield, but it can throw Toa here and there? Drained Kanohi and Elemental powers are just in place, and make sense.

So Pohatu’s and Kopaka’s adaptive armor changed? I was imagining them wrong throughout the whole book… What do they look like now?

They can use Suva from the star?
That chapter is actually cool. We go hacking the star finally!

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I guess the Star doesn’t have an especial enviroment, so they should look like the 2002 Toa Nuva (but Pohatu is orange).

It’s comparable to Axonn – roughly the size of a Toa, though far bulkier (and of course, more arms). Lhikan was really only able to stop it because it was going after someone who was lying on the floor.

Huemus is correct, they look similar to the 2002 Toa Nuva, except Pohatu is orange and his weapons are upgraded slightly. Kopaka has his standard sword and shield, and both of them have some type of blaster, haven’t decided what that would be since they haven’t used the blasters yet.

I don’t see why they shouldn’t be able to; the only thing we know that can block a Suva is the walls of the Robot, which block standard teleportation, but we know that the walls of the Red Star don’t block teleportation because Gaardus could teleport in just fine. (unless Gaardus warps space like Artakha)