“What is my life? Ahhhh!” -That first photo.
YOU’RE ALL GOING TO BURN! WE’RE ALL GOING TO DIE!
mech part good, HF torso plate bad
It’s not just a HF plate making up his torso, plus it was the only part that I could find that had a odd design like his screen torso without needing to paint it
The red HF Torso does look a bit out of place, but the rest of the MOC is pretty good! I especially like how you made the robotic legs.
If I had a red HF symbol I could fill that part in to make it less obv I’d think, but thank u the legs were a struggle to figure out haha
well the torso plate is the only part that’s noticable; and it ruins the flow of the MOC. For something in that scale… maybe something based off a red Mata torso, or something in black, like one of the Witch Doctor armor pieces? (isn’t black his actual skin color with red tattoos?)
That first image has big “KENOOOOBIIIIIIAAARRRGGHHH!” energy and I love it.
Battlefront II mod when? 
Good attempt, the lower could possibly do with being a few studs shorter. I’m not sure if there are any easy ways to do a more red/black mix (Kalmah shells are a little too marbled).