I’m still working on his backstory, but this is a MOC I’ve had for a while now.
I really like the trans green in the protector mask, so I used it, and added small ‘jungle’ details just because.
I’m still working on his backstory, but this is a MOC I’ve had for a while now.
Pretty neat MOC, I like the little details such as the vines you added to him.
I like the shoulder pads, almost like knight armor
I like it, the lime green on the shins looks a little out of place though
yeah ive been debating one moving some parts
Do you have protector of jungle? If so his trans green shells might work
I used them all XD
Oh, that’s a shame, good MOC anyway. I’m guessing you’ve done this a few times before
ive actually been doing it for years, but in 2011 I tossed out all of my pieces and IMMEDIATELY regretted it. So I had to start over since 2012. check out my deviantart (pensensei) for my earliest stuff from 2012
I’ve just started, I used to hate breaking up sets but oh well. It was too fun
exactly, the only set I kept together was Vezon
I like how you’ve got the snakes and vines on him, they look pretty great. Those feet could use work, though.
The only set I don’t dare take apart is Kardas, even for parts, took me hours to build. But so far Tahu and Kopaka 2015 are lying on my floor in pieces cos I used them for my first MOC. And soon Tahu 2016 is going to be joining them.
Yeah I’ve only made one MOC
yeah that makes sense, ive been tossing a foot design around, i’ll post it when I build it
Thanks for the deviantart, you have some good designs there.
Here’s my first and only MOC if you’re interested:
https://board.ttvpodcast.com/t/my-first-moc-iserif/17226/15
Tell me what you think
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I saw it and thought I commented, its pretty good for a first, and reminds me of some of my older ones
Ok thanks
Those shoulder pads stick out a bit but look great! The lime green’s fine for detailing like with the vine pieces, but I recommend getting more transgreen. Also recommend replacing the dark green fingers with black. Speaking of black, how about breaking uo the black in the torso/upper legs with some more green? I like your foot design but recommend you fill out the heel more. How about angling those back spike upwards a bit more? They’d add a lot to the figure’s presence. Lastly, I recommend finding a more uniform background. A cluttered one takes attention away from the MOC.
I know I gave a lot of critique, but that’s only to improve a MOC that I really like!
I have been digging a bunch of boxes out for a background XD
thanks for the critique, i’ll consider it, and the heal thing was the idea lol
I’d just recommend filling in the open socket. As Eljay would say, it lookds unfinished
Do you have a thick bed sheet you could use?