This is my first Moc on the site. Now I do have a Mocpage account, under the some name. I will put a link to my page, just because I have more Moc there, and so you can get a idea what to expect from me. Thanks of looking http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/110384
Well as of story…well I like not to say too much, because I am writing a story. I may post it here or my Mocpage, but ever way I’ll let you guys know. But as of Night all I can say is that he has amnesia.
This MOC looks really cool, particularly the torso. I think the color scheme goes well with him being ‘The Shadow One’, while the claws and spiky armor make him very threatening. My only complaint would be that the shoulders feel a little off for some reason.
He not a Toa, just because. But as for the whole blocky look, yeah I can under stand that it not for everyone, but thanks on telling me on what you think.
Although it does a get a bit blocky at some places because of the Technic pieces (the calves and lower torso especially), I do think you pulled off the humanoid shape better than some official sets have. I also like the detail you put into the upper torso.
Places I might suggest editing would be the upper arms (make them a bit fuller), the hands (something that fits the overall style better or at least streamlines better), and, as @Elijay would suggest, switch out the red pins and blue pins!