Self-moc:revamp - Khaios of The Four Winds, Master of air'

Ayy i am back with some upgrades to mah self moc. i have corrected all of the fault with the first two versions so this is like V3??? anyways i got me some pictures for u guys and here they are

All of the different views

The original and new leg design side-by-side


The new arm design

the upgrade to the torso

armor piece attached

a picture of all of the parts seperate

and a stance

So Khaios is a air toa and unlike the original he isn’t really a dimension hopper. instead he is more like a hermit, just kinda walkin round the world looking for someone who need him, and eventually forming a toa team. he dabbles in different thins like mask making and weapon making, so much so that he hasmade several masks that he can use with their respective weapons. He has also experimented with a secret technique that allows him to fuse the weapons to their respective mask, adn then fusing the mask into his own mask, basically allowing him to switch masks at will. The only problem is that he can oly fuse together six mask(mirroring the number of maks the original toa had to find to make their golden masks) which limits him to using certain masks. With all masks come certain weapons, for example with his sky adapted miru comes his air swords(mirroring the weapons used by nuva lewa)

Please leav constructive criticism as you se fit, but don’t just say that it is bad without reason

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Man this master of air has less green than my self MOC XD

The legs are unarmored and the ankle joint should be under the knee socket, that also goes for the same kind of thing for the lower arm, and the arms aren’t very good either, and also its a good idea to have the torso have ball joints and not sockets for the shoulders so you get more articulation, that said if you must use a socket instead of ball its fine if you design it well enough.

So points

  • Armor the lower legs

  • redesign the arms

  • balance out the colors better, more green, no gunmetal, and stick to one underarm/technic armor color, black is best but you can use a few gray parts if you need if they aren’t too apparent.

And forbidden hit me 4 times -_-

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Needs more lime, and less blue pins.

Ayy thx for the comments so let me adress ur points

-i will try to even out the colours as best i can although it still might not be so satisfatory. i will also adress the ankle thing so it’l look better although it might not work as they also help the moc keep its stability. as for the shoulders i am most likely going to keep them the way they are, but i may switch to balljoint depending if i can make it look good or not (I actualy attached some pieces to him which makes him look like a real toa of air but i don’t think i can make it work if i have to redesign the arms again). as for the color scheme i will definitely fix as it is very important. i have already started fixing the legs up and armoring them, thx for the tip

@Hutere well i will try to implement more lime parts, and use as little blue pins as possible

I will try and take into account all that you have said and will fix the moc as best as possible with the limited parts that i have on hand

thank you for leaving some critism and for helping me grow as moc’er

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I recommend adding more lime green and/or shades of green. Do you have two of those Hordika arms on the forearms in dark green? If so, use those.

(also, fix the asymmetrical technic colors on the arms)

Other than that, this MOC is pretty solid.

I like it. The colors could be executed better but I like the general scheme. I’d personally find a way to hide some of the exposed build parts or make them look better though

Off topic but the name also reminds me of my self Mocs first 2 versions when he was male. Don’t know if it was intentional but I like it.

The torso poseability is actually pretty cool.

~W12~

If you like this moc you will definitely love the upgrades i’ve made to it… had it ready for months too lazy to upload pics though :stuck_out_tongue:

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The moc is cool, but kinda weird, in a bad way.

I can’t even see a method to the madness

But hey… who am I to talk

Oh yea its totally wierd, its a pretty old version tbh its much improved by now just havent uploaded pics yet… im gonna soon though. The basic idea of this version was just creating custom limbs

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