This is my first proper M.O.C so it may not be the best.
Front:
Back:
Side:
No torso armor:
Weapon:
One last pose:
Leave a rating out of ten below and any constructive criticism
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8/10, I’d say…
The colour scheme is very bland.
But otherwise great, especially for a first moc!
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I would have don a different colour but the ice toa are my favourite so
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You could add more silver, or maybe gold.
Maybe
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You have a good start. Here’s what I’d change. First mid torst is really bare, and from the looks of it doesn’t have much stability. Both should be rectified. The basic concept of the armor on the sides of the sins is interesting, but their excat postions are a bit awakward. Maybe you could try making custim legs so that that armor can be more centered.
I would not do this. Maybe just add a little light grey here or there.
The middle torso is only unstable because its on a ball joint and the ball is slippery some how so its abit loose
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Well, I’d change that.
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I like the white hau, but that’s about it.
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Looks pretty cool, maybe add some blue to make the colours a bit more interesting. 
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Looks really neat. I’ve never liked those feet though. They just look so flat. I would also recommend adding some other color, maybe trans blue or something.
The torso is also really good!
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Please, don’t do this. I beg you.
Anyway, for a first MoC, this is really good! I’ll say right now that it’s better than my first MoC… I would maybe add some silver in some places, like the chest, and the shins. I’m also not super sure about the Nuva armor you put on his hands… Oh, and maybe give him a secondary color, like Metru blue or Mata blue.
The weapon is cool, but would benefit from a longer handle. The custom body is pretty impressive for a first go. 
So I need to add more color and better torso armor
I really like the custom torso! I looks really solid and still has articulation. I don’t really like the lower legs, but the Inika limbs are alright for the rest of the MOC.
Something about him looks a little lanky. Perhaps make the arms a little shorter?
I do agree I may change them to the metru upper arms