Smooth Criminal

Are you okay, Builder?
You’ve been hit by, you’ve been hit by a smooth criminal
Ow

I present my Michael Jackson MOC based on the SmOoTh CrImNaL music video! I had a dream two days ago about the design process, so I brought it to life!

Note that this entire MOC is buildable IRL and aims not to use rare parts. However, some areas in the torso clip, so you might have to rework a few parts to make it work IRL. It is not too hard; I just didn’t feel like fixing it. Every other part of the MOC works just fine IRL. Also, the ankles are built weirdly to prioritize that leaning forward motion and leave the axle empty to connect to the stand. The hat brim looks better IRL.

Here are the rest of the shots!

And that is the coolest MOC around!

Minorly bombastic criticisms are welcome. (Note that this MOC is not in response to the movie coming out. I just like Michael Jackson’s music.)

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It’s really weird seeing a suit adapted in Bionicle form without using any notable amount of CCBS or technic panels. Unfortunately that approach means he’s kinda lumpy everywhere.

Will we see a Thriller version of Michael anytime soon?

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It is unique, hehehe.:smiling_face_with_sunglasses:

I was aiming for a more rugged look. I reminds of a lot of G1 Bionicle sets. I was thinking of using

But I stopped myself because I decided to lean

Toward a greebled direction.

If I feel the inspiration (or another dream lol), it might happen!

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Like Ghid said, it’s odd not seeing CCBS on this, where smooth textures are presumably preferrable.

That being said, it’s not awful, I can still get the general impression of MJ. I’d be interested if he could actually hold the lean in real life.

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Greebles are cool.

I can see you guys really don’t like this MOC that much.

I’m glad MJ is still recognizable in this very stylized form.

He should be able to, unless the axle holding the ankle socket decides to disconnect.

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Greebles are cool, sure, but greebles have their place. Sometimes a thing that’s meant to be smooth should actually be smooth.

Take it from the guy whose self moc wears a suit; you want the suit to look as much like a suit as possible. Of course if I ever actually made an update to my self moc since it’s been a decade maybe I’d have the opportunity to put my words into action but I’m too lazy :weary:

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I get what you’re saying, but I’m too stubborn about these greebles.:face_with_steam_from_nose: In my personal preference, I keep the greebles. I fear I would make the MOC feel too modern using a lot of CCBS and the newer style of technic panel. I want it to be more

And less

Get what I mean?

As you can tell, I have a very specific vision for this MOC.

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That’s certainly a style choice, but in that instance I feel like Michael Jackson in a suit is a poor fit for the artstyle. The old technic Stormtrooper has a very specific charm and aesthetic that’s hard to replicate with typical Bionicle pieces (or in this case, almost entirely Bionicle pieces).

Also, as a depiction of a Stormtrooper, it’s not that great. You’d need to lean into the aesthetic pretty heavily to have it come off the right way. And on the subject of leaning I just noticed the arm is disconnected in the leaning render :cold_face:

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I just see it as a bioniclized suit.

Only area it doesn’t work is the hips. They’re wide and square.

I love the disk hat though.

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TAIPU ARE YOU OK

ARE YOU OK TAIPU

YOU’VE BEEN HIT BY

YOU’VE BEEN TAKEN BY

AN INFECTED NUI-RAMA

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You know what, you’re right

I knew Onewa was tall but I didn’t know he was that tall

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“Onewa? Are you confusing me with Hafu again? I’m not a Po-Matoran! I’m from Onu-Koro!”

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We all slander Taipu in this house :triumph:

Bro was literally just built different (easily snatched)

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I remember as a kid playing MNOG and getting jump scared by the part where he gets snatched by the Nui-Rama. Nowadays, I laugh hysterically every time it happens.

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I read this out loud, and everyone cringed. Lol.

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…I’m not personally a fan of making LEGO creations based on real-life creepy individuals. Disregarding that, though, his legs and torso feel a bit over-textured, and with little cohesion to offset that. There are some good techniques scattered throughout the build, and I don’t dislike his arms… But, when I look at your MOC, I can’t stop thinking about the implications of the real-world person this is based on.

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I like this MOC. Great work :+1:

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YAY! That’s what it is. A Bionicle x Technic suit.

I can never unsee it. I will fix it now.:construction_worker_man:

Thanks! I love using the bar connections on the Kanoka disks!

@Ghid and @Chronicler

MNOG talk, I see

@Zhyndea

I tried to keep the texturing consistent from past experiences with the Boards…

Thanks

Could you clarify?

… I have no implications behind this build except Smooth Criminal is a good song, a good music video, and Michael was good at what he did: Pop music.

@Fluffy

Thanks!

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The style is definitely interesting, though it’s still pretty impressive what you did with mostly g1 bionicle parts.

Smooth criminal? More like greebled criminal.

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Thank you!

This is legit humor. I laughed! :laughing:

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