Star Wars: Stranded on Zoma V - Sign Ups (OPEN)/OOC Chat

Also something I forgot to include, I don’t believe Boomstick knew where Duke and friends were either. I’d have to review again, but I don’t recall the Captain telling the other troops they were in the armory. The last message was that they were in the crew’s quarters and then heading towards the rendezvous point. So Boomstick should have appeared there if he was searching for the Captain, or, went to the front as previously told.

In which case, perhaps the course of action was to inform the player IC that he didn’t know Captain Duke’s current location and should ask. From there, Duke would tell him to head to the front and, if really persistent, then tell Boomstick their current location. Maybe they could have met up in the hangar inside as a compromise.

Which is fine. Even if the clones knew that, they didn’t have much choice and had to destroy the one. In the moment, they could at least have forgotten that potential detail until hearing the others coming. But the players could have at least maybe had a bit more detail as to why. Though it is a minor problem.

I figured it was due to plot and worry about fights being too easy. However, it is just the start of the game. Did you intend for it to be easy or hard, for at least one character to die already or something else? If this didn’t go as you wanted, that just means adjusting things for later encounters. Always adapt.

At least adapt in ways that aren’t nonsense. I’m a simulationist, one of the worst things you can do is fail to simulate the reality correctly.

Consider this a good word of encouragement. If your wording isn’t tight, I will abuse every opening given to me. The more vague you are, the more it’s left up into my hands, all the more I’ll take and rip it open to do whatever I please. Usually I’m nice enough that most won’t notice what I’ve done until all their characters have been thoroughly crushed.

So yes, definitely be more specific about where these shots are going.

Otherwise, looking forward to your next post. No further advice from me at the moment.

But he did.

And I have many more, for Winger, MaximusPrimal, you, and every user who participates in these RPs. I usually resort to mercy and allow people a chance of redemption, to prove my early judgements wrong. So good luck to all when my patience finally runs out.

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