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@MichaelBT-7474

The attack from the first Undead Knight was blocked successfully by Candall but the other Undead Knight would have made a deeper cut than Candall firstly anticipated as it struck pass his chainmail armor, his attempt was however successful as the sword was taken out of the Undead Knight’s sword but the other attack was rendered unsuccessful as the Undead Knight used his hand as a shield and more likely the weapon would penetrate the Undead Knight’s hand but the other Undead Knight had another chance and took it, raising his sword he slashed towards Candall’s arm that was being used to stab the other Undead Knight.

I’m sorry, this is very incoherent and I’m having a hard time understanding due to it being a run-on sentence. Could you reword this for me?