The Mary Sue Test!

This looks fun. Gonna run my character Ari Wohlford from one of the best RPs on the boards, ToGaV (man her design in that post is outdated, I’ll need to replace it with a newer drawing)

They are possessed by an angel

They are possessed by a demon

They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

They are physically strong.

They have a rare hair/fur color (red but like… literally red)

Their eyes are an unusual color

This happens to be red

Their eyes change color

They have wings

They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

They are immortal

(if a female) they have large boobs

(if a male) they are very muscular

[?] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Idk, depends on the person. This point is a bit silly)

They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

They are a healer

They are from a very rich/royal family

They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

They have lost one/both of their parents

They ran away from home

Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[?] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death (Haven’t figured out this bit of the lore yet)

They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (does crab person count?)

They never knew their parents

They were abused/spoiled as a child

[?] They are very attractive to the same gender (idk, depends on the person. This point is a bit silly)

They have lots of friends/no friends

They are emo/cutesy

They look much younger/older than they really are.

They are currently in a relationship (the only ship she has any relations to is the one that floats in water :smirk:)

They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

They have a mental disorder

They have an emotional disorder

They struggle to stay sane

They are a psycho

They have multiple personalities

They are very intelligent

They have hallucinations

They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

They have a guardian spirit

They have a ‘special type’ of soul (what in the world does this even mean!?)

Their soul is not the same as them (what in the world does this even mean!?)

They can talk to spirits/ghosts (the entire crew of the Kaelin’s Hand can communicate with the Ghost Sailors, so yeah no)

Some part of their body glows

They have a rare/unusual name (I guess…)

They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age (This is major spoilers for the Wohlford lore so I will neither confirm nor deny)

They are connected with a certain element

They are connected with a certain animal

They always dress like a certain ‘label’

They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (crab people, yes)

They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (Idk does being really physically strong count?)

They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

They are hiding from someone/something

They have a rare blood type

They cry blood (when in the world has this been anyone’s character trait, ever?)

Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (the letters G, O, R, O, V, arranged in that exact order)

They are from a different country to where they live

They are very mysterious/dark

They are very lively/happy

Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

They are very patient

They are from a long line of … (people who build ships for a living. One of them was a crab)

They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

They have amnesia

They have some sort of permanent medical condition (does being really fricking buff count?)

The have a curse upon them

They are involved in some sort of prophecy

They are ‘the chosen one’

They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

They smoke

They are an alcoholic

They are overweight

They are addicted to drugs

They have a short temper

They enjoy bullying others (unintentionally, yes)

They do not care much about others

They are emotionless

Aaand the final score is 10. I guess Ari is a balanced character yay (it is an accident, I can’t write)

And quite a few of the points on the list make zero sense. Yeah I’d say a redo wouldn’t hurt

Dolphus when he is not a Hasbin Hotel character

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