It’s good you know this now, maybe try toning it down just a bit, see if it helps.
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How’s that?
seems abit long but I’ll try it with my main characters and original Self-Ocs
JMP(J)
Vent(X)
Note: these are just my regular, art versions of the characters. My moc versions and whatever other versions I make the characters into may not be as OP
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[J,X] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[J,X] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[J] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[J] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[J,X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[J,X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[J] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[X,J] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[J] They struggle to stay sane
[J] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[X,J] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[J] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[J] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[J] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[J,X] Some part of their body glows
[J,X] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[J] They are connected with a certain element
[J,X] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[J] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[J] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[J,X] They are very patient
[X] They are from a long line of …
[J,X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[J] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Scores:
JMP: 19
Vent:15
I might post more of the test later
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Gonna take this again using both G1 and G2 Ekorak.
Ekorak G1: E1
Ekorak G2: E2
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[E1E2] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[E1E2] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[E1E2] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (Destructokinetic for E1 and Technokinetic for E2)
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[E1E2] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (if you count Kanohi)
[E1E2] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[E1E2] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’
‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate
to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[E1E2] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[E1E2] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[E1E2] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[E1E2] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[E1E2] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Final Score: E1/E2 Tie of 9.
Wow. Didn’t realize that for how different Gen1 and Gen2 Ek are they were still so similar.
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These are two OCs I RP with a lot.
Sigrid: Basically a wizard 
Imradil: This knightly guy I like.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[I] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[S] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[S] They are immortal (sorta)
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[I] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[S] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[S] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[S, I] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[I] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[S] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[S, I] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[I] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[S] They are very patient
[I] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Imradil = 7
Sigrid = 8
Meh, they’re still interesting to write about
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K = Kyoryu Yellow
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[K] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[K] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[K] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[K] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[K] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[K] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[K] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[K] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[K] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[K] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[K] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[K] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[K] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Well, it appears that the redundant hero has scored a 13. Now, for a little explanation:
Kyoryu is strong when in his suit, which amplifies his strength.
Kyoryu’s father was killed in a Deboss attack.
Kyoryu witnessed this.
As a child, Kyoryu could convince his parents into buying almost any LEGO set he wanted.
He’s friends with all the Kyoryugers and every member of both Team RWBY and Team JNPR.
He’s in a relationship with Ruby.
Kyoryu looks around 20, but he’s actually 16.
Kyoryu is a straight-A student.
Kyoryu has formed a tight bond with his Zyudenryu, Deinochaser.
He requires Bravery to become Kyoryu Yellow.
Kyoryu was born in the States, but moved to Japan when he was 15.
While there is a certain point where he can’t handle crap from others, he is pretty patient.
He usually is seen wearing a green jacket and a yellow Ninjago ■■■■■ under.
Question is, are YOU actually sixteen? 
13 (14 in December), actually… but I’m not putting Justin in Kyoryuger!
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Matoran Ardvesa: A1
Inspector Lazadahki: L
Lumika, Toa of Sonics: M
Ardvesa, Toa of Jungle: A2
Jasa, Toa of Gravity: J
Huurua, Toa of Psionics: H
Avolo, Toa of Plasma: V
Fotiki, Toa of Lightning: F
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[V] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[Technically all of them?] They are immortal
[H?] (if a female) they have large boobs
[V] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[All but A1] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[M?] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[All but A1] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[F] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[A1?, A2?] They are very attractive to the same gender
[L, F] They have no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[L, M, J, H] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[Does Mata Nui count, being their deity and all?] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[What does this mean?] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[Everyone] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[Everyone] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[What does this mean?] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[L?] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[M, H] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[H, F] They are very mysterious/dark
[A1, A2, V] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[L, M, J, H, F] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[Does armour count?] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[Everyone but L, probably] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[F] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[V] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[F] They do not care much about others
[H] They are emotionless
Total Scores:
Matoran Ardvesa: 8
Lazadahki: 10
Toa Lumika: 12
Toa Ardvesa: 10
Toa Jasa: 9
Toa Huurua: 13
Toa Avolo: 11
Toa Fotiki: 12
Some of these, of course, are due to stuff that’s standard in Bionicle, but still. Once I finish posting them all on my MOC topic, I should run my Slizers revamps through this thing!
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I’m gonna try this with my self-moc!
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[if teal counts] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[he has Air Katana and a Jet-Pack] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[how can I/he not (but I won’t count since love isn’t canon [screw you Greg])] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[elemental powers] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Calix, mask of fate] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Won’t count Kanohi twice] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[toastone] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[merged minds] They have multiple personalities
[two heads are better than one?] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[heartlight] Some part of their body glows
[not unusual for Bionicle] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[two, actually] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[wandering mercenary] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[wanderer] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[Le-Race] They are very lively/happy
[multiple personalities] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[Does Kanohi count?] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[does splicing count?] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[Ta-Race] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
So, some of these questions are obviously not taking Bionicle norms into account, so I won’t count those in the final total.
The total, not including Bionicle norms, is around 7, give or take. That is actually lower than I expected! If I included the null questions though, he is a 15.
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Whelp, I’m finally gonna do it now that I know my Self-MOC’s story and personality.
[O = OculusNuva]
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[O] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[O] (if a male) they are very muscular
[O] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Since he is a Toa, I assume he would be)
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (Not sure if the Gold Pakari counts since it’s better than a normal one, so I’m gonna leave it blank)
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[O] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death (He witnessed his teacher’s death, who was as close to a parent as someone in the MU can get.)
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[O] They look much younger/older than they really are. (He is a young Toa, but he looks much more experienced than he is.)
[] They are currently in a relationship
[O] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit (He has only a few, but he doesn’t really state them all of the time.)
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[O] They have a rare/unusual name (Oculus is not a very common name among Matoran, and when he became a Toa of Magnetism, he expanded his name to OculusNuva. Pretty much like Takanuva, except that people still call him Oculus.)
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[O] They are connected with a certain element (Whelp, he’s a Toa of Magnetism, so yeah.)
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[O] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[O] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[O] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Final score: 10
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Decided to try this with my HF self-Moc, Willess (or whatever his name is; he changes it infrequently)
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[W(I guess you could call HF his “family”)] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[W] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[W(only one, and then later none)] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[W] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[W(sometimes)] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[W(fire)] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[W(HF, sometimes) They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[W] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Edit: whoops, forgot the final score: 8
Ekorak = E
Scydrak = S
Icaria = I
Asurwolf = A
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[AS] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[S] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ESIA] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[A] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ESIA] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[E] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[I] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[I] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[ESIA] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[A] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ESIA] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ESIA] They are connected with a certain element
[A] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[E] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[I] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[A] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Ekorak: 7
Scydrak: 7
Icaria: 8
Asurwolf: 9
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Right, so i decided to do some of my villain, along with MOC JMP(Note, MOC JMP was basically a JMP from the original universe that somehow arrived to spherus magna, but I’ll ignore that and just pretend his original history is ignored
Derkayes- D
MOCJMP- MJ
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[MJ, D] They are physically strong.
[D] They have a rare hair/fur color
[D] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[MJ] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[MJ, D] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[D] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[MJ, D] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[MJ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[MJ,D] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[D] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[D, JMP] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[MJ,D] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[D] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[MJ,D] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[MJ] They are from a different country to where they live
[MJ,D] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[D] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[D] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[MJ,D] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[D] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[D] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Score:
MOC/BIONICLE JMP- 11
Derkayes- 12
Testing Marserun, the antagonist that was to be, and Drakaal, my ex-secondary selfMOC. Would have tested Jethryn but that would give spoilers for the current version. Also taking the liberty to strike a couple of tropes that aren’t Mary Sue for BIONICLE.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[M, D] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color Given BIONICLE characters usually don’t have hair… is having hair in general part of this trope?
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red: All the crazy eye colors are commonplace in BIONICLE.
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[D] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc All Toa of Psionics/All Toa of Fire/All Matatu wearers/etc.
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etcProbably less of a problem than the above since it’s an uncommon mask.
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[M] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents Families are non-canon, so this doesn’t make much sense.
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[M] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents Who does? See above.
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[M, D] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are. Age, what’s that?
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’
‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate
to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem.
[D] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[D] They are a psycho
[D] They have multiple personalities
[M] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows Heartlights FTW
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type What’s a blood type?
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[M] They are from a different country to where they live
[M] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[D] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[M] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of … nothing, because no one has parents
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’ it’s BIONICLE, every good hero has a destiny.
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[D] They have a short temper
[M] They enjoy bullying others
[M] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
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Alright, doing one for my first OC I’ve actually put any thought into: Melfious.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[M] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[M] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[M] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[M] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[M] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[M] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[M] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[M-Ish… Read the story once I find it.] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[M-ish] They have multiple personalities
[M] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[M] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[M] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[M] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[M] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[M] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[M-ish… read the story when I get it up] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke (Does a body made of a smokey substance count? =P)
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[M] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[M] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
12.5-13.5
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I will just use my self moc nisgi I guess
(how original amirite ah ha ha ha)
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[N] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[N] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[N] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[N] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[N] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[N] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[N] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[N] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[N] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
before I say the final tally
no nyran, I did not mean for it to be this number in particular
but
Its a solid 8
m8
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I wouldn’t have it any other way. <3
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I’ll do this on another Bionicle-based OC of mine, Logos the Great Being
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[yup] Their eyes are an unusual color
[yup] Armor happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[yup] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[yup] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[yup (initially)] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[yup] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[yup] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[kinda] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[yup] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[I guess] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[yup] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[yup] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[yup] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[yup] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Hmm… 14. Sounds about right
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] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[R] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[R] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[R] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[R] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[R] They have a mental disorder ( DOES ADD COUNT? )
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[R] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[R] They are hiding from someone/something (KINDA)
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[R] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[R] They have amnesia (Sorta)
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
RT scores a 9…if some of these count…other wise…more like six or five.