The Mary Sue Test!

[Payinku]

I just realised I never ran Payinku through this,

so,
Ore Sanjou!

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[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[] They are physically strong.

[burnt orange? sort of? you don’t see it very much “fur” “armor” same difference] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[all matoran can become toa, so I don’t think it counts] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[see above] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[technically have to count this now, as he carries a remove poison kanoka] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[more “left to travel” takua style but I’ll count it] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[“very” I’ll count this] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[] Some part of their body glows

[how strange is “Payinku” in matoran standard? I’ll count it] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[all matoran are] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[if this includes phobias, it’s being counted] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[gonna have to count this one] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

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let’s see…
7
I’m dull apparently.
though I’ll add that Payinku is determined, and that his kakama is originally a toa’s.
and the phobias thing refers to his fear of ussal crafs,
so a maybe 9?

[fangface1]

Could do some of my non-BIONICLE characters
H=Helias
M=Mesper

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[M] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[M] Their eyes are an unusual color

[M] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[H] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[HM] They have lost one/both of their parents.

[H] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[M] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[H?] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. I actually haven’t quite decided this yet.

[] They never knew their parents

[MH] They were abused/spoiled as a child. I feel like abused and spoiled should be two different things. For clarity, Mesper was abused, Helias was spoiled.

[] They are very attractive to the same gender.

[H] They have lots of friends/no friends.

[M] They are emo/cutesy. Certainly tries to be

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[HM] They are currently in a relationship. I hate this part. Is this at the beginning? The end? Anywhere along the story? Either way, I tagged it for both.

[HM] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. What if this is treated as a flaw though?

[] They have a mental disorder Probably both, but my knowledge on mental disorders is not that of an expert

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities.

[] They are very intelligent

[M?] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[H] They have a guardian spirit. 3/4 into the story

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[H] They can talk to spirits/ghosts 3/4 into the story

[] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[H] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[H] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[M] They are very mysterious/dark

[HM] They are very lively/happy. By the end at least

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[M] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[H] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. The story is kind of a deconstruction of the whole prophecy concept though.

[H] They are ‘the chosen one’ I mean, he’s pretty much held at gunpoint to go on this journey

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[M] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

H: 14.5
M: 11.5

[DarkTakanuva]

I’ll do my self-MoC.

DarkTakanuva = D

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[D] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’
‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate
to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[D] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[D] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[D] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

DarkTakanuva scores a 4.

[Stoax]

I’ll do Stoax, Minera, and Rauera

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[S] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[R] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[S] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[M] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[R] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[R] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[R(kinda)] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[R] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[S+R] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[M] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[S (his mask glows)] Some part of their body glows

[S+R+M] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[S+R+M] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[S] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[S+M] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[R] They are from a different country to where they live

[R] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[M] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[M] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[S] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

Stoax:7
Minera: 7
Rauera:10

Hopefully with chapter 9 of Operation Vindicta, I’ll be able to flesh out Stoax and Minera a bit more. But for now, at least the three are balanced.

[Political_Slime]

(sigh)
Okay, I’ll break down and actually do this thing.

For one of my two OCs, Political_Slime

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[Heyo, black eyes with white pupils] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[Yes, yes and yes.] They have multiple personalities

[] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[Does a stick count as a pet?] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[] Some part of their body glows

[Political Underscore Slime is a VERY common name.] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[y u be hatin on slimes ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[U W0T M8] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

Score: 4
Apparently Slime is VERY Anti-Sue. Suppose I should figure out more of a backstory for him or somethin.

[TFM101]

Man, these are kinda long, but… FOR SCIENCE!
P: My Self MOC
E: Excavor

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[P] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[PE] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[PE] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[E] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[P] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[PE] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

Total:
My self MOC: 4
Excavor: 3
Wow. My guys need more backstory.

[Tate]

@Political_Slime

Score: 4
Apparently Slime is VERY Anti-Sue. Suppose I should figure out more of a backstory for him or somethin.

il help you out
lets see…

@Political_Slime

They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

oh, obviously this one

@Political_Slime

(if a male) they are very muscular

of course

@Political_Slime

They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

obviously.

@Political_Slime

They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

this is a given, this is quite obvious something slimes can do

@Political_Slime

Some part of their body glows

ur head u dumbo

@Political_Slime

They are connected with a certain element

off curse slime
u hav powr ovr slimm

@Political_Slime

They are ‘the chosen one’

ovulusly

[Willess12]

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[B] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[B,M] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Ra] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[Ra] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[B] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[B] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[B] They have lots of friends/no friends
[B] They are emo/cutesy
[H] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[Ra] They have an emotional disorder
[Ra] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[B] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[B] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[M, Ra, R, H, T(humans)] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[T] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[T] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[T] They are from a different country to where they live
[B] They are very mysterious/dark
[M] They are very lively/happy
[Ra] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[Ra] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[M(not sure if I should put Blue here or not; he kinda has to keep his armor on or he dies] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[H, Ra] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[B] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[B] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
B=6
M=4
R=1
Ra=8
t=4
H=3

Since I have backstories established for none of them except Blue before the story begins, this could go up, but I can tell that Rick sure is boring. I need to spice Rick up a bit.

[Neowulf]

Neo:N
Phase:P
Chill:C
(lol)

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[NPC] They are physically strong.

[PC] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[NPC] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[NPC] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[NPC] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[C] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[NPC] They have lost one/both of their parents

[P] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[C] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[PC] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[P] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’
‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate
to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem.

[C] They have a mental disorder

[NP] They have an emotional disorder

[P] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[C] They have multiple personalities

[P] They are very intelligent

[C] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[NPC] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[NPC] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[NPC] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[P] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[NPC] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[NC] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[P] They are very mysterious/dark

[N] They are very lively/happy

[NC] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[P] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[P] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[NP] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[N] They are ‘the chosen one’

[C] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[NPC] They have a short temper

[P] They enjoy bullying others

[PC] They do not care much about others

[P] They are emotionless

---

Score
Neo:14
Phase:18
Chill:17

This exposes something about my characters. They are mostly the same except for a few key differences, having lifted each of them from the same pool of tropes.
Luckily, the hero of the story comes in at balanced, while the other two come in at borderline. Maybe too much separates them?

[Looch]

Looch

[x] everything

Looch is the universe.

Looch is all.

[Leoxander]

@LelouchViBritannia

Looch is all.

Praise Looch.

[Keravnos]

This a cool little topic. As of now, my BioOC stands at an 11, so not bad!

[SammySpartan]

I’ll do Sammy from the latest Never Ending Adventure.

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[S] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[S] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[S] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[S] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[(Kinda? I’ll say yes for now.)] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[S] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[S] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[S] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[S] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[S] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[S] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[S] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[S] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[(In a sense, yes.)] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

---

Sammy is… actually pretty rounded. I was expecting a higher score. Guess I’m a better writer than I give myself credit for.

[HewksDKowlihad]

ayy lmao
Doing this for K4 (K4)

[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[K4(ish, he’s a robot)] They are physically strong.

[] They have a rare hair/fur color

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[K4(Multiple sights, like Samus’ visor)] Their eyes change color

[] They have wings

[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[] They are immortal

[] (if a female) they have large boobs

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[] They have lots of friends/no friends

[] They are emo/cutesy

[K4(After being stuck in a tube for around 2,000 years, he still looks fresh.)] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities

[K4(Robot.)] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[K4(Trans neon green studs everywhere.)] Some part of their body glows

[K4 (M4X1L10N-H0M1K4)] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[K4(Robot.)] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[K4 (Recently gave him a necklace.)] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

Points: 7
ayy Balanced Character.

[Toatrex]

I’ve decided to do this for my rp’d characters.
Rohrik
Hino
Tyoh
Kihryah
Alizha
Nymph
Unit
Faceless

[U] They are possessed by an angel ( unit is a robot who is possessed by a toa)

[] They are possessed by a demon (being possessed by a Makuta was an idea I tossed around in my head when coming up with a character for Rohrik)

[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (rohrik was going to change personalities into the makuta’s)

[RTFKANU] they are physically strong.

[RH] They have a rare hair/fur color (rohrik is a male toa of water. And hino is a female toa of iron who painted her armour black to better utilize her sneaky fighting style)

[] Their eyes are an unusual color

[] This happens to be red

[] Their eyes change color

[®K] They have wings (Rohrik has a mutated form wich has wings and a tail)

[K] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[F] They are immortal

[AN] (if a female) they have large boobs

[T] (if a male) they are very muscular

[T] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[all since all bionicle have special powers] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[A] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[] They are a healer

[] They are from a very rich/royal family

[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[] They ran away from home

[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[FK] They have lots of friends/no friends (all others have at least one friend but none others have a lot of them)

[] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[(H)]They are currently in a relationship (in the rp universe she’s in a relationship with matoro)

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[] They struggle to stay sane

[NKFA] They are a psycho

[] They have multiple personalities (again was an idea for Rohrik)

[H] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[R] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (have I ever told you about Polly? /s)

[] They have a guardian spirit

[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[RTFHNAKU] Some part of their body glows (eyes and heartlight)

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[HARUN] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[A] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[A] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[A] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[RH] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[RH] They are from a different country to where they live

[R] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[RKF] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[A] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[H] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (mute)

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[ATN] They have a short temper

[AKNTF] They enjoy bullying others

[AFKNT] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless

Unit: 5 points

Tyoh: 3 or 6 points

Nymph: 4 or 7 points

Faceless: 5 or 7 points

Kihryah: 6 or 8 points

Hino: 10 points

Rohrik: 11 points

Huh, they are all balanced.

(Edit: finished post after accidental posting)

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Figured I’d try my hand at it:
Pirean [P]

[] It is possessed by an angel.

[] It is possessed by a demon.

[] It is a werewolf/vampire/faerie.

[P] It is physically strong.

[] It has a rare hair/fur color.

[]It’s eyes are an unusual color.

[] This happens to be red.

[] Its eyes change color.

[] It has wings.

[] It can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■.

[] It is immortal.

[P] It is very muscular.

[] It is very attractive to the opposite gender.

[P] It is telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. (Telekinetic)

[P] It has a sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (Mind-read/Telepathic)

[] It has object of some sort that gives it powers.

[] It has a special ability/power, but it doesn’t know about it yet.

[P] It was bestowed/cursed with these powers.

[] It is a healer.

[] It is from a very rich/royal family.

[] It doesn’t know that it is from a very rich/royal background.

[] It lost one/both of its parents.

[] It ran away from home.

[] Its parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[P] They never knew their parents

[] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[] They are very attractive to the same gender

[P] They have lots of friends/no friends. (None)

[P] They are emo/cutesy

[] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[] They are currently in a relationship

[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[P] They have a mental disorder

[] They have an emotional disorder

[P] They struggle to stay sane

[P] They are a psycho

[P] They have multiple personalities

[] They are very intelligent

[] They have hallucinations

[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[] They have a guardian spirit

[P] They have a ‘special type’ of soul (None)

[] Their soul is not the same as them

[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[] Some part of their body glows

[P] They have a rare/unusual name

[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[P] They are connected with a certain element

[] They are connected with a certain animal

[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[] They are hiding from someone/something

[] They have a rare blood type

[] They cry blood

[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[] They are from a different country to where they live

[P] They are very mysterious/dark

[] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of …

[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[] They have amnesia

[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[] The have a curse upon them

[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[] They are ‘the chosen one’

[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs

[] They have a short temper

[] They enjoy bullying others

[P] They do not care much about others

[P] They are emotionless

Final Score:
Pirean: [14]

(Then again, he’s basically a murderous warlord exile, but whatever.)

[Booster_Gold]

BG=Booster Gold
Yeah, I’m gonna fill this out with VERY personal info.

[BG] They are possessed by an angel

[BG] They are possessed by a demon

[BG] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[BG] They are physically strong.

[BG] They have a rare hair/fur color

[BG] Their eyes are an unusual color

[BG] This happens to be red

[BG] Their eyes change color

[BG] They have wings

[BG] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■

[BG] They are immortal

[BG] (if a female) they have large boobs

[BG] (if a male) they are very muscular

[BG] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[BG] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[BG] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[BG] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[BG] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet

[BG] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[BG] They are a healer

[BG] They are from a very rich/royal family

[BG] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[BG] They have lost one/both of their parents

[BG] They ran away from home

[BG] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[BG] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death

[BG] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[BG] They never knew their parents

[BG] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[BG] They are very attractive to the same gender

[BG] They have lots of friends/no friends

[BG] They are emo/cutesy

[BG] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[BG] They are currently in a relationship

[BG] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[BG] They have a mental disorder

[BG] They have an emotional disorder

[BG] They struggle to stay sane

[BG] They are a psycho

[BG] They have multiple personalities

[BG] They are very intelligent

[BG]They have hallucinations

[BG] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[BG] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[BG] They have a guardian spirit

[BG] They have a ‘special type’ of soul

[BG] Their soul is not the same as them

[BG] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[BG] Some part of their body glows

[BG] They have a rare/unusual name

[BG] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[BG] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[BG] They are connected with a certain element

[BG] They are connected with a certain animal

[BG] They always dress like a certain ‘label’

[BG] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[BG] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[BG] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[BG] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[BG] They are hiding from someone/something

[BG] They have a rare blood type

[BG] They cry blood

[BG] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[BG] They are from a different country to where they live

[BG] They are very mysterious/dark

[BG] They are very lively/happy

[BG] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[BG] They are very patient

[BG] They are from a long line of …

[BG] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[BG] They have amnesia

[BG] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[BG] The have a curse upon them

[BG] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[BG] They are ‘the chosen one’

[BG] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[BG] They smoke

[BG] They are an alcoholic

[BG] They are overweight

[BG] They are addicted to drugs

[BG] They have a short temper

[BG] They enjoy bullying others

[BG] They do not care much about others

[BG] They are emotionless

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Your score is 18, Veltraxx.

[Leoxander]

@Booster_Gold

Yeah, I’m gonna fill this out with VERY personal info.

It seems your characters are more OP than @Ekorak’s

[Booster_Gold]

@Leoxandar

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