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Takes less than most people like to think.
It was my OG Bonkle characters that were OP.
Ek can literally become a 2D image and that’s it.
(until late story stuffs which I won’t get into and still isn’t more OP than a standard Toa)
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Decided to run through this with the main characters of my newest Story, Muhoe and Midak.
M=Muhoe
K=Midak
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[M] They have a rare hair/fur color (I’m counting Mask color here)
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[K] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (he can tell when people are lying)
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[M] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[M,K] They have lots of friends/no friends (Midak has no friends except Muhoe, Muhoe’s everybody’s friend)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[K] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (Midak will constantly remind Muhoe that he wants to protect her)
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[M] They are very intelligent
[M] They have hallucinations (or are they visions?)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[M] They have a rare/unusual name (Muhoe is not a normal Matoran name)
[R] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[K] They are connected with a certain element (Midak. Onu-Matoran)
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[M] They are hiding from someone/something (Makuta)
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[K] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[M,K] They have amnesia (since it takes place on Mata Nui, technically everyone does)
[M] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (Muhoe’s poison)
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Final score
M=9
K=6
Huh. I actually expected Midak to score higher than Muhoe. Then again, trying to work this test with BIONICLE characters is hard.
~W12~
seeing as I rebooted my storyline, time to do this again.
RT=RaptorTalon. C=Crimson
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[(Kinda RT) C] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[C] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[C] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[C] They have a mental disorder
[C] They have an emotional disorder
[RT] They struggle to stay sane
[C] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[RT, C] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[RT C] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[RT. C] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[C] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[RT] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[C] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[C RT] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[C] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[RT] They have a short temper
[C] They enjoy bullying others
[C] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
RT has a score of seven and a half. and crimson has a score of 13-ish.
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Trying this out for characters in the Bota-Nui story I’m working on.
[G]-Garta [T]-Telzin [S]-Scorzen [Y]-Tykal [I]-Ilani [O]-Oduna
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[GYIO] They are physically strong.
[S] They have a rare hair/fur color
[S] Their eyes are an unusual color
[S] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[T] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[GTSYIO] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[GTSYIO] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[O] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[T] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[IO] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[TI] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit, for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[GYI] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[SI] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[GTSYIO] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[I] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[I] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[Y] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[GI] They are from a different country to where they live
[I] They are very mysterious/dark
[T] They are very lively/happy
[O] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[GS] They are very patient
[O] They are from a long line of …
[I] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[IO] They have a short temper
[I] They enjoy bullying others
[GI] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Final Scores:
Garta - 6, Telzin - 7, Scorzen - 8, Tykal - 6, Ilani - 8, Oduna - 6
Seems I’m okay so far…
Let’s do Rey from Star Wars Episode VII: The Force Awakens.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[Rey (kind of)] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[Rey] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[Rey (the Force)] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Rey (the Force AND ALSO how did she learn mind control? idk lol)] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Rey (did the Lightsaber give her Force memories and training? Maybe. I’ll count it)] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Rey] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[Rey] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[Rey] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[(you have a boyfriend? a cute boyfriend)] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[Rey (lightsaber Force memories…I guess she was the only one who got them, so yeah)] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[(not for Star Wars, she doesn’t)] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[Rey] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[Rey (in the desert of Jaaku, but I think it’s the same principle)] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[Rey] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[Rey] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[(don’t know if I should count this)] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Rey - 13. Not bad. Also, she’s not a Mary Sue. Well, I mean, she is, but no more than Luke is a Mary Sue at the end of Episode IV. Luke/Rey’s story is over a trilogy, not just a movie.
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I’ll use a Bionicle OC (Straxon) and a non-Bionicle OC (Who I named Pyrra)
P=Pyrra
S=Straxon
[P] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[S,P] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[]Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[S] (if a male) they are very muscular
[P] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[P] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[P] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Straxon thinks he does] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[P] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[S] They have lost one/both of their parents
[P] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[S] They never knew their parents
[S] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[S,P] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[Straxon is, or at least in his head] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[P] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[P] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to sprits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[S, as he was born on April 1st] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[P] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[P,S] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[S, if Voya Nui counts] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[S,P] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[P] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Okay, so that’s 13 for Pyrra, and 10 for Straxon. I guess they’re somewhat Mary Sues (or Pyrra is, at least)
why not, i’ll bite
i’ll do three of my mocs, only one of which is posted. try to figure out the other characters from this, i guess.
Nekidax
Neurex
Gucaa
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[All three] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[Nekidax, Neurex] Their eyes are an unusual color
[Nekidax, Neurex] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[Nekidax] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[I guess Nekidax is for a Bionicle] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[Nekidax] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[Neurex] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[Nekidax] They struggle to stay sane
[Nekidax] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[Gucaa] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[Kinda normal for a Bionicle] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[All] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[Nekidax, Neurex] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[Gucaa] They are very lively/happy
[Nekidax] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[Neurex] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
so in conclusion, all my characters are boring except the one i’ve thought the most about. who would’ve guessed?
this isn’t designed for bionicles, is it?
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alright let’s try this out with three of the more important characters for The Anomaly
edit: im also adding Hoari (okotan adventures spider saga) and Craig (The identity)
h and c respectivly
Artillery = art
Amera = a
Kiria = k
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[c] They are physically strong.
[Art (we’ll get to that when we get to it.) white (does’nt really counnt if his hair color was caused via stress put on the body but hey)] They have a rare hair/fur color
[Art] Their eyes are an unusual color
[Art (kinda)] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[k, art, a (all of the dollar store variant)] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Art (limited foresight)] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Art (saeleht)] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[H] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[H] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[Art (what parents?)] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[c] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[dollar store immortality to the rescue] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[(not as of right now in story) Hoari (engaged)] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[k] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[Art (perks of being comprised of energy)] Some part of their body glows
[H, I would argue Craig as I’ve never met someone with that name.] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[Art] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[you see i don’t know what that means] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[a, H (Lives the nomad lifestyle)] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[H] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[(you should get that checked out imo)] They cry blood
[Art has mild PTSD from falling through a multiverse well but honestly that experience would be traumatizing for anyone)] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[question should say universe] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[H] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[k, Art] They are very patient
[H] They are from a long line of …
[H] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[C (Maybe still in the very early concept stages for The Identity] They have amnesia
[is being comprised of energy a medical condition?] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[c] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[C] They smoke
[C] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[A, C] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[Art (people that aren’t in his immediate clique) C] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
artillery 9
amera 3
kiria 6
Hoari 8
Craig 0 incredible i may have just created the perfect character
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this looks fun.
Uhhh I’ll do a D&D character and two characters from a story I’ll never write.
D&D character: C
Character 2: R
Character 3: A
[C] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[C, R] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[C, R] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[C (not sure if those one counts because he’s an Aasimar but whatever)] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[R] (if a male) they are very muscular
[A] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[C] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[C] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[C] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[C, R] They have lost one/both of their parents
[A] They ran away from home
[A] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[C, R] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[A] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[C, R, A] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[A, R (could’ve sworn PTSD was an emotional disorder but nevermind)] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[A, R] They are very intelligent
[C] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[R] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[A] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[C] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[A] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[C, R] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[A, R] They are from a different country to where they live
[R] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[R] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[A] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[R] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[A] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
C: 13
R: 12
A: 8
Now what we really need is an edgelord test.
don’t steal my idea @N01InParticular
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Good idea we should get to work on that.
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let’s do it together.
are you not bothered that this topic was 5 years.
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Sounds good.
No.
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This is kind of just a list of traits–I’m not really sure that possessing them makes a character too perfect, it’s probably more about the character’s execution/presentation than actual things about them. Maybe. Though enough of these traits will, I guess, make the character a boring cliché.
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I don’t remember if I did this originally or not, but I do remember seeing this topic. Not including what’s par for the course in BIONICLE.
[Jethryn] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[Jethryn would have eventually] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[Jethryn, Jetera] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Jethryn, as a Kanohi power] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Jetera] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Jethryn/Jetera] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[I don’t remember, but probably Jethryn] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[Jethryn] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[Jetera] They have a guardian spirit
[Jethryn/Jetera] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[Jethryn] Their soul is not the same as them
[Jetera] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[Jetera, eventually] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[Jethryn] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[Jetera] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[Jethryn/Jetera] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[Jethryn] They are emotionless
9 for Jethryn, 8 for Jetera.
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The Bohrok Lord - An earlier version of Sharnak I made when I was 12. Once an ordinary Le-Matoran from Metru-Nui, he fell into a bohrok nest where his head was exposed to energized protodermis, turning it into a Tahnok-Kal’s. Has all 12 bohrok powers. His head has no Krana, rather a pocket dimension. Despite all his powers, he’s kind of an idiot and a jerk that no one takes seriously, not even himself. Did I mention I made him when I was 12?
Sharnak - a Le-Matoran from Metru-Nui that either fled or was exiled during the civil war. He is a skilled engineer, creating experimental tools, gadgets and managed to reverse engineer the Vahki. He is eccentric and jaded, especially among Le-Matoran. Has a strong dislike for authority. Wears a powerless Akakau. Is destined to become a Toa.
Ansark - Sharnak from an antimatter universe. Has a specialized energy shield and devices that shield him from the main universe. Though a matoran, his tools allow him to channel his limited elemental powers, which take the form of destructive anit-matter energy in the main universe. His shield makes him resistant to physical damage, but if ever punctured, he is completely destroyed in a blast of energy. Though a matoran at the beginning, he gradually replaces parts of himself until he become something unrecognizable.
Lizard Wizard - My Argonian that I always play as in every Elder Scrolls game. All he wants to do is live a quiet life, but is always dragged into fate of the world prophecies. How does he live over two hundred years? Why does his appearance always change? The Hist made him a Time Lord or something IDK. And yes, that is his name.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[LW] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (Werewolf in Skyrim)
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[A] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[TBL] Their eyes change color (Went from red, blue, to cyan)
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[LW] They are immortal (Due to corpus, Lizard Wizard is biologically immortal)
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[TBL/LW] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (If one counts certain bohrok powers, then yes)
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[A/LW] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[LW] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[LW] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[LW] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[TBL/S/A] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[TBL?] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (If one counts bohrok)
[LW?] They never knew their parents (Had to be born to uncertain parents to fufill the nerevarine prophecy. Of course, due to time travel, they might not have been born yet.)
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[A] They have lots of friends/no friends
[A] They are emo/cutesy
[LW?] They look much younger/older than they really are. (Potentially. And depending on perspective, he’s -200.)
[LW] They are currently in a relationship (Is married in Skyrim)
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[A] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[S/A/LW] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[LW] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[TBL] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (Had a pet kraata that died very quickly)
[] They have a guardian spirit
[LW] They have a ‘special type’ of soul (Is both a dragon’s and the reincarnation of a Chimer hero)
[LW] Their soul is not the same as them
[LW] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Has had conversations with ghosts, so this technically counts)
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[LW?] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (While not a holiday, he is born under a certian date to fulfill the Nerevarine prophecy)
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[TBL/S/A] They are connected with a certain element (Air)
[TBL] They are connected with a certain animal (If one counts bohrok)
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[LW] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[All] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[LW] The have a curse upon them (Lycanthropy)
[LW] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[LW] They are ‘the chosen one’
[LW] They have insomnia (You never have to sleep in skyim)
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[A] They have a short temper
[TBL] They enjoy bullying others
[A] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
FINALS SCORES
TBL - 7
Sharnak - 4
Ansark - 7
Lizard Wizard - 21
Considering TBL has 12 powers, I wouldn’t call him balanced. Lizard Wizard is unsurprising though, he basically becomes a god at the end of each game.
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Alright it’s time to run the test for the greatest character of them all:
Ghid.
They are possessed by an angel
They are possessed by a demon
They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[G] They are physically strong.
They have a rare hair/fur color
[G] Their eyes are an unusual color
This happens to be red
Their eyes change color
They have wings
[G] They can grow extra body parts/ [what is this ceosored wor- oh right shapeshift]
[G] They are immortal
(if a female) they have large boobs
[…G?] (if a male) they are very muscular
They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[…G?] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
They are a healer
They are from a very rich/royal family
They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
They have lost one/both of their parents
They ran away from home
Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
They never knew their parents
They were abused/spoiled as a child
They are very attractive to the same gender
[G] They have lots of friends/no friends
They are emo/cutesy
They look much younger/older than they really are.
They are currently in a relationship
[G] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
They have a mental disorder
They have an emotional disorder
They struggle to stay sane
[G] They are a psycho
They have multiple personalities
[G] They are very intelligent
They have hallucinations
They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
They have a guardian spirit
They have a ‘special type’ of soul
Their soul is not the same as them
They can talk to spirits/ghosts
Some part of their body glows
[G] They have a rare/unusual name
They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
They are connected with a certain element
They are connected with a certain animal
They always dress like a certain ‘label’
They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga HOW DARE YOU EVEN CONSIDER THIS QUESTION
They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[G] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
They are hiding from someone/something
They have a rare blood type
They cry blood
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
They are from a different country to where they live
[G] They are very mysterious/dark
[G] They are very lively/happy
[G] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
They are very patient
They are from a long line of …
[G] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
They have amnesia
[G] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
The have a curse upon them
They are involved in some sort of prophecy
They are ‘the chosen one’
They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
They smoke
They are an alcoholic
They are overweight
They are addicted to drugs
[G] They have a short temper
They enjoy bullying others
[G] They do not care much about others
They are emotionless
So 17 counting the maybes. Also 2 in the ‘good’ section? This comprehensive test is lacking in a couple areas and assumes in a few as well.
Also, quickly gonna mention:
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
‘Lots of morals’ here implies virtuous morals. Ghid’s depiction in written work has always established him as a morally complex character, but always a conflicted one as well. He will proudly proclaim his perceived-as-objective perspective on society, which is always just shy of being moral but too strong and well-versed to be contested with any success. As fatalistic or overbearing as the reach of his morality may be, you are compelled to agree - he’s 80% right, after all.
Also just like me he’s VERY intelligent and has EXTREMELY good attire and wait why did I check psycho
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[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
Doug’s a doggo, like all the other clones.
[X] They are physically strong.
He stronk
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They ran away from home
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
As much as you can call your dna template a parent.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
Then again, it might’ve just been another clone, they all start to blurr together after a while
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
Cycles through both
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
Doug: Because it’s a pun, since its a name, and it sounds like the word dog, and doug is a wolf, and wolves are related to dogs somehow, even though Doug is actually probably a coyote man thing, but that’s close enough for it to be clever and funny
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
I mean probably, clones like him are all over the place.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
I mean he basically exists to act as a yes Man and Muscle for some ambitious thug looking to make it big.
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
Well, he is on the run after all
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
He’s not exactly the most popular coyote/wolf/dog/man thing in town, thought how they can tell him apart from the rest is beyond me
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Doug: 12
…Wait a minute…
