Very riveting story. Needs some Takuma action tho
@Viper does not say "wot???" 7/23
@TakumaNuva should walk in at the end and just be like "GG 10/10 g8 b8 m8, let's move on"
This story is like... Well... Its actually pretty good!
And finally, is @exxtrooper not in here because he had mic issues?
Takuma has headphone issues, Exx has mic issues
This is pretty good!
A little tip for ya: Whenever the person who is speaking dialogue changes, you need to start a new paragraph.
I thought my mic was doing aright at the moment, whats this thing about killing poor pandas.
This is titled "The murder of the Panda", meaning that only one panda was murdered, not multiple like you suggested by saying pandas
And Kini and Invi
Because cutting open a safe requires that much suspense and drama.
Nice cliffhanger tho
Why did Varderan say "exactly"!?!
It should be Mesonak
A timeless classic
Why is this suddenly about me all I did was say how great it was
9/10, keep it up my dude