please Winter learn to punctuate
if you end a sentence with a continued stream of text, it will seem like one long chain of a sentence with grammatical errors theoretically easy to spot. I had to reread this chunk of text I quoted several times before I figured out what was supposed to be going on:
oh and uh
I know I technically do this too, but it’s a bit cheesy to put the name of the story right at the very end. It’s a bit cheesier to capitalize it like the title, though.
I find the idea to be a Funny™️, but I try to keep the mention of it to only part of it or, inversely, not technically mentioning it at all. Take, for example, Nothing But Rust, where I break the name in half and turn it into a sentence.
And for the latter, see what I did in Weak: