The names you give your mocs are cool, but they way the moc looks in the final product is… eh. You need to get more shell pieces and make your mocs less skinny and spindly, and more bulky and cohesive.
sorry if this sounds like harsh criticism, its just a way to make better mocs.
Doesn’t scream “sun”, really, but I like the torso design.
same as my comment on you other moc.