So instead of writing loads of lore I’ll just do something quick
This is my self moc, his arch enemy is OneOfAMillionPeopleWhoLikePhantoka and he fights for the protection of existence
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The MOC looks decent, but he has kind of a dumb name for a MOC, no offense. The same for the story.
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The blue axles kinda stick out, but I like it overall, though I think your other MOC is better.
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There was originally a far longer backstory, but I didn’t want to clog the post up
Yeah, I should’ve probably swapped them out with black ones…
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I can’t see him clearly. The lighting is meh and the background far too distracting.
The photos are a bit awkward and the blue pins do stick out, but the colours are good, the custom torso is fantastic and I love those shoulders, are they double jointed? they look like they are so they can move up and around.
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First off, it seems like your pictures are being cropped in the previews. I believe that making them wider (setting the width to be about 4/3 the size it currently is) will fix that issue.
The MOC itself is a pretty decent inikabuild. Colors are pretty consistent, though the blue pins do stick out quite a bit. I think if you have some of those pins in tan, that would mesh with the crimson and brown. Gold sword does seem out of place though. Honestly, given his/your name, I’m surprised he doesn’t have any silver on him. Would help to brighten him up a little too, given his two dark colors.
My main gripe here is with the Visorak feet on his thighs. I think the thighs would work better with some standard Metru or Inika armor; the long, thin shape of the Visorak foot doesn’t lend itself to thigh armor, but it could be used on the shins. The Huna as a pommel for the sword is kinda weird too, and the trans lime Bohrok eyes are a little weird, considering the only other trans lime is his eyes and heartlight, but it’s not a glaring issue.
Assuming this is your first MOC, you seem to be content sticking with simple designs but elaborating them where you feel comfortable, and you know how to make a consistent color scheme, if not the most striking one. Better than a lot of people when they get started with MOCing.
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The color choice is decent
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