This is two panels from a MSPAF comic that I made. How dose it look?


Some context Sol and Rakovi (I know very creative name), are here to find a Olmak, so they disguise themselves as a matoran (Rakovi) and sister of Skrall (Sol).

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The linework is a little flat but the colors are nice. It’s an interesting world you’ve developed here.

One thing I will mention:

The red lines are the street and the initial building while the lime lines are the second building. While the baseis in line with the shape of the street, the rest of the building is turned at a sharper angle, looking something like this if viewed head-on:

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If you are wondering, it’s the Kingdom timeline, after Nuparu managed to make a spaceship. They landed on Bara Magna.

Yeah, I tried to make a perspective but now I see it, it was a mistake. I’ll change it, I hope have the file with all the layers separate.

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Done.

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Nice! I love the Visorak here. It looks good.

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