Ta-da! My first toa moc, and my first female moc!
Atrix on her own:
“Nom!”
Celzi:
D’aww, he’s just like a big puwppy-dawg
Atrix on her own:
“Nom!”
Celzi:
D’aww, he’s just like a big puwppy-dawg
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The wolf is nice. The Toa…eh, not so much. The icy beast head arm is pretty cool though…but why?
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The beast arm is something I’m yet to reveal 
That is one weird torso build…
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The torso was probably the hardest part of the moc. I actully had intended the moc to be like an ice hermit, but that never happened.
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The beast arm doesn’t look very integrated to me, and I feel like the shoulders may be a bit too broad at the connection points.
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Some time I’m going to redo the shoulders completely.
Great moc! I love the wolf.
I like this, it is pretty good for small mocs
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That wolf is cute.
The Toa is a bit chesty don’t ya think? I mean, not that I was looking there but it kinda sticks out.
Also, what are you going off about @ItalianMustache?
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He was going on about backstory that I made for her, then I removed it later. As for the toa, I’ve since updated her a bit, so I’ll post that in a bit.
Pretty much everything under the waist of the toa needs to be redone, the upper torso could use some minor adjustments but nothing too bad.
I have an issue with the dogs HUGE arms, but I’m guessing it’s a reference to legend of kora or something, though to keep the color scheme consonant the feet really should be white, I believe the front paws do come in white and the back ones come with Melum.
Okay, chill pill, both of you.
@ItalianMustache there’s a difference between constructive criticism and being a jerk. Being constructive implies that you have a positive desire for the artist to become better, and it’s clear you don’t want that.
@Creeper22122 Just because someone harshly criticizes your work does not give you grounds to insult them. If you’ve got a problem, flag the post and let the Staff take care of it.
Any more of this from either of you, and there will be administrative consequences (i.e. suspension). We clear?
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