Toa Kemzal is my self moc (obviously). He is a Toa of speed who modified himself to be stronger and more faster.
name: Kemzal
gender: male
element: speed
race: Toa
mask: Kakama
weapons: Minigun, sword with built in lazers, hidden guns (on both lower and upper arms)
story:
Kemzal is native to the island of Cryobe and goes around the city of fire saving matoran from mechanical rahi. His arch nemesis is the dark archer known as Buskyte an ex Toa who now fights crime by killing his enemies and he has also killed three members of Kemzal team. They have crossed path many times often ending with Buskyte beating Kemzal. Kemzal is part of a Toa team currenlly with two other members Kishikara (Toa of digitalness) and Karhraman (Toa of air).
The MOC itself is, to be honest, very nice. I like the color set, the armoring is overall very nice, and the combination of the black visor on the Phantoka Kakama is interesting. If I have anything full to say, it’s that the legs could use some cleaning up, specifically removing the BIONICLE armoring in favor of smoother armor to fit the torso and arms, along with fixing the open pins and such. A good base build, regardless. You have my approval.
…uhh, does that really count as an element? it seems even more redundant when he has a kakama as well, considering his weapons and colors, iron seems more likely to be his element.
you seem to give toa mask powers as elements, not saying you shouldn’t, but it seems strange.
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as for the actual moc #holy gadunka!
that is one impressive moc,
you have a good sense of complexity without being over designed,
you used the mata feet,
the proportions look good,
the colors are consistent and well dispersed,
it doesn’t look like you used any cheats to hold things together,
and those weapons are awesome, great job, 10/10
the only thing I see that seems odd is that he doesn’t appear to be able to see, though it could be said that it’s like sunglasses so I won’t complain about it.
It’s MOCs like these that make me simultaneously saddened in my own MOCing ability, as well as motivated to learn more techniques and become this good.
And I know I’ve seen you before somewhere… Do you do the YouTubes?
