Toa Lewa Nuva (Phantoka) head drawing

Second forward-facing head drawing. I planned to make it more like OG Miru Nuva (a.ka. adding more fins), but the plans ultimately failed.

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This looks pretty good, although I have a few pointers, mostly concerning the neck. First, it seems a bit too wide, and the shaping seems off. It’s a bit hard to describe, but necks don’t curve outward like that. They start off more straight, then as they connect with the shoulders, they bend downwards. I’ll provide a picture to show what I’m talking about. Also, the pistons in the neck should probably angle inwards as opposed to outwards. The last thing I’ll point out is the lines on the neck. Instead of just doing one simple curve across the entire neck, try and have them contour to the shapes of the neck. For example, the front of the neck seems to stick out more, so have the curves become steeper there. Again, it’s a bit hard to describe. Other than those small things, I think it’s really good


(I didn’t draw this, obviously)

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neato!

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