"Toa/ Master of Earth" JMP, My self moc

Story: Once a disembodied, indestructible being trapped within a regenerative crystal, an exo-toa prototype proved to be a useful body for him. Placed in by Vent, JMP took over the body and made use of it’s systems and weapons, even upgrading part of it.

Whilst trying to pretend being a toa, most people find him odd, due to his hollow and purely metallic body. Most toa assume he might be a creature or a makuta when he isn’t. Working with Vent and his comrades, JMP acts as their tank, main warrior and a great old friend. Currently he is helping the Av-Matoran Jeris find his friend, Takua

Personality:

Gruff and yet humble, he is not without moral. However being near immortal and living for a very long time, he has gone quite crazy, and ocassionally risks even his friends for gambles against enemies. However, he can be kind and caring…in a rough way. Mainly after the secrets of the Great Beings, he tends to be curious about the Matoran universe. If angered to an extreme degree, or in the vicinity of a large wave/horde of enemies, JMP goes berserk and crushes any and all who stand in he and his friend’s path

Weapons:

-Battle Axe
-Double bladed Axe
-Mace

intergrated weapons:

Battle blades: Similar to Vent’s Gauntlets, except only battle blades are accessible
Chaos Battle blade: An upgraded version of the battle blades, it instead replaces the left arm
Ionic Plasma Pulse cannon: A powerful laser cannon that can replace either fore-arm
Chest Beam: a special built-in chest laser using whatever energy it can use


Alright, abit hollow and odd in a few areas, maybe a few exposed areas. Backpack doesn’t really do much other then help cover up the chest. The Pakari wasn’t the first mask for him, but it fit. Odd hands and his left fore-arm is loose and tends to fall off. Partially top heavy and even with the recent versions of the socket peice, his arms and waist tend to fall or slide down. However, he is a fine moc and all around alright

Main Inspirations:

A few Transformers, including optimus prime

Exo-Toa

Mechs


360 turn-around

Now time for him to show off some weapons(including a mace, battle axe and double-sided battle axe)

now then, onto the regular battle blades

Now then, time for the chaos blade and the Ion Plasma cannon!

Chest Cannon

Now then, time for extras

“I wonder what kinds of foods and snacks they have…?”

Facepalm

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He. Is. ■■■■■■.

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Thanks. He actually got a minor upgrade: The Backpack/Chest plate things and the arm blade connectors were new. This is mostly his final design, like Vent, but I’m trying to figure out a way to balance him and add pistons or something to support his legs, waist and ion plasma cannon. Also his chest cannon shoots out nova blasts :slight_smile:

While he looks pretty good, there’s some things I have trouble with.

The red axles on the claws are kinda conspicuous. You may wanna change them to lack.

The feet(?) are…well…HF 1.0 torsos. Not the best. Perhaps change them to regular feet?

Also, you may wanna take your pictures somewhere else. A good background can truly highlight the great parts of the MOC. with all that stuff in the background, it’s kinda distracting the viewer from the main focus: the MOC. A simple trick is, if you don’t have a white wall, to put a piece of paper behind the MOC. That way, the MOC is the main and only focus.

This has the chance to be a great MOC. Keep it up!

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The Feet are actually Av-Matoran Torsos, Also I’ll try getting a better background

That is cool.

Nice Parts Usage! You might wanna try and take some less blurry pictures so that we can see him in all of his self-MOC-y glory!

“Nice Arc-170” is all I have to say.

thanks! Although I’m curious as to where you got the quote

Quote?

Er Nvm.

Love the story idea, and with some modifications the moc could become something really great.

pics are a bit blurry, but this looks dank.

this was a long time ago man, and the road I took made this thing… bad

which is why I stick to normal MOCs now

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