Thinking about entering the Tuyet contest. This is the first version I made and would highly appreciate some feedback as I want to make a satisfying version of her. I don’t own the 3D-printed version of her mask or sword at the moment so I used a Faxon and one of my own made swords instead.
Tuyet holding the Nui Srone in her left hand with the broadsword in her right. Wanted her to look feminine and in the same hight as Toa Lhikan. Can’t decide if the sword does a good job or if I should replace it with the 3D-printed version.
Empress Tuyet from the Toa Emire Alternate Universe. Parts of the Nui Stone is now inside her armor. Red eyes and the Avohkii in her hand to give her a more evil look and an refrence to the Toa Empire. Any thoughts on the red details on her sword? One of my own inventions.
Thank you all for the feedback on the last posts I made. I’m very thankful.
Not bad. I’d like if her eyes were different color than blue. like the empire tuyet has. Also I am a sucker for heart lamps. if you can find a way to give one that would be cool.
I do like it. I regocnise it is tuyet. Also the weapon is as described
Since her eyes are blue in the non-empress version, you can’t really see them through her visor.
Try putting some blue in her arms and upper torso beneath the black to break it up more. It looks like a solid block of black right now, and it clashes with the black-on-blue in her legs. The build itself is good, the color blocking is just off.
The red bits from the second version should translate over to the 1st one because they make her face and sword “pop” from the rest of her. The normal version feels too monochrome, and there’s nowhere for the eye to really settle.
Interesting. Looks similar to how’d I imagine Tuyet to look like.
Also, I’d change the normal version’s eyes to orange to be able to be seen through the visor.
I definitely like what you’re going for here. In terms of critiques, the torso could definitely use some more blue in it. I’m also iffy on the feet, I think they could stand to be bulked out a bit more. And I do like your sword, as opposed to a 3D piece.
Overall though I think you’ve got a good base to work with.
Definitely red, or whatever other trans color you settle on for that version. Orange could also work, and I’m pretty sure Barraki eyes come in that color. The main thing is that you’re using the same color for all those trans pieces.
