It's so good to see that Arthron now. At most, I can only say I wish that the MOC Venom made was kitted with light maces instead of the swords. As far as the actual sketch is concerned though, I can't find too much to critique. Sure, it kinda looks jumbled in places, but we are dealing with very detailed models here and we don't have colors to emphasize boundaries. If anything, my biggest criticism is the upper half of that ... explosion? Looks a little janked-up.
Amazing sketch as always, tak210. I'm not sure I can handle this recent influx of fan-art. It's all too good to be true.