Name: Tyracent
Element: Fire
Occupation: King
Homeland: Cindaria (formerly named KAI-HOE) BIO
Tyracent was once a simple TOA who knew how the country can prosper.
he formed a revelution and took down the King. He know rules and fights for Cindaria in the name of the people "Call me King or Tyrant my people will call me their leader"
(Tyracent to Iriko)
Weapon Storage is OK, but sword should be placed on its side
The Model just looks strange
Color Distribution is terrible
Weaponry is a bit too large for the MOC
Legs are a bit too simplistic
Open socket on the foot in the middle of the chest looks unfinished
The pelvis armor is unnatural
The back is filled, but not very well
Open pins on back look bad
Toa hands on back look pretty bad without weapons
Arms are too thin
Vezon chestplates on arms look bad and probably flop around
I would give this MOC a 3/10.
I’m not trying to be rude or mean, but the MOC has a ton of issues. Littered with bad design choices and an overall unappealing appearance, I think it has a long way to go.
First off, The piece came out the same year, meaning the Terms “Inika Armor” and “Vezon Chestplate” are similar to toe-mate-oh and tu-maugh-toe. Secondly, the color of the piece doesn’t really matter when referring to it. We still call Raanu’s feet the “Keetorange Toa Mata Feet”, not his feet. Also, I know who the Inika are and I’m pretty sure you know I do, so why are you trying to condescend me? It is extremely unnecessary.
lets start with the legs. The feet, they are fine, whatever. the lower legs need bulk and they need it bad, they are WAAYYYYYY too skinny for the huge body, the upper legs are still, too skinny, the red pins you used to attach them looks odd and it sticks out really oddly, it looks like he had a strange looking compound fracture. so scrap the legs, head back to the drawing board.
the torso. the cod-piece looks off, and it looks really odd compared to the HF foot above it, about that foot…NO. it looks bad, the open socket and the dip in the foot look strange and make him look fat…but in the strangest way… so retry that, the orange is not spread out AT ALL, and the MOC pays for it, the use of av-matoran legs is interesting, and with some work you could make it look better. the red visorak feet…eh, they are okay. the whole torso looks…off, maybe try to make a better one? maybe spread the orange around and maybe use that inika chest for the chest? if custom is not your fancy.
the arms, they are wayyyyy too skinny, the upper arms look bad because they are black, and they are so skinny compared to the rest of him, the lower arms are just kinda meh,
the head. eh.
the weapons…dont really care for them. the sword looks cool enough, but the gun thing looks odd.
Over all, he has some work to be done, he is not the most awful MOC ever, and he is okay for a beginner. just keep at it and you will get there. good luck!
