Unity: A Poem

Creative Content Literature
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I hate to be that guy, but Matoro has a Tryna, not a Volitak. Otherwise, great work!

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Moving On

I remember the day
the weather
how I felt
“An Important Announcement Regarding Bionicle”

I remember the cold feeling that crept up my spine
like pill bugs underneath a rock
and the cavity filling in my chest
filling with emotions and memories

I thought that it couldn’t be true
there had been a mishap
someone had gotten something wrong
but as I waited for new leaks, new products, new comics
I knew it was over

Makuta lay on the harsh desert of Bara Manga
Mata-Nui towered above his brother’s steaming head
The matoran and toa watched in awe as the mask of life rocketed toward them
and with one final speech, it left

Tahu remembered what happened
I learned that memories make us

Takanuva was now the most wise
I learned that wisdom is everything

Lewa kept laughing
and I learned that happiness defines who we are inside

I remember the day, now
how I felt
the weather
“BIONICLE’S RETURN”

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Great job, Challa. I think this one worked rather well; going from a story-based perspective to your own experience.

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this one, I quite like this one

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This is what’s brought me back to the boards, this poem. It’s actually a lot better than I remember it being.