Name: Vanaru A.K.A: The Rahi Hunter, The Primal Vengance Element. Fire Occupation: Hunter BIO
Vanaru was a great Hunter until he was attacked by a half TOA half Rahkshi who took his Arm and Eye.
later Harik found him near dead and took him back to Cindaria.
Later he was given a Prosthetic Arm and a Eye. he now has only one job Kill the Toa who Crippled him
His back has a lot of armour and some teeth of a Giant Muaka who said something about canon altering (possibly a friend of Ciduis) which he uses as Throwing Knives
He’s a bit lanky, if I were you I’d add on more stuff to the back torso. I like the simple dark red, I don’t like the special “flame shot”-just the colour makes it stick out a bit.
The legs: the feet are feet, they are whatever. the lower legs need bulk, custom and/or CCBS is your friend. the upper legs are way to skinny and thin. they do not flow at all and need some replacements. once again, custom and CCBS are your friend. so overall, the legs need work, real work.
the torso, the torso is eh. the waist is thin and needs armor. and the shoulders look awkward and too skinny. over all, meh.
the arms. they are too long, and I myself enjoy the look of a longer lower limb. but this is friggen crazy. CCBS and custom are your friends. overall, needs to go back to the drawing board. I also think that some nice shoulder armor would suit him, if you made him more bulky.
the head is a head. you used that mask, so hats off to you.
the weapons. my favorite part of the MOC, they are done well and not too crazy, while not being too bland. good work!
Overall thoughts. he is okay, and with some work he will be great! cant wait to see what is next!