WaterGafna's BIONICLE poetry

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These are poems which I have composed. More will perhaps follow.

Song of Makuta (Early G1)

I am darkness
crawling in your
hearts

I am vortex
of a thousand
parts

I am evil
living in your
mind

Progenitor
of serpentine
kind

Red Star

A star blazing in red
Through which those who are dead
By its power are revived
Once dead and now alive

But they are all cursed
To never again see our world
And instead like ghosts roam
Through halls of crimson overworld

Kings’ plot

In the time before the time
Our universe was ruled
By six powerful kings

Who together decided
In a great gathering
To fly without having wings

To reach the heavens above
To touch Great Spirit’s abode

To throw him down
And to crown

Themselves kings
Of all things

First Song of Makuta (G2)

I crafted masks
Of a great power

But my brother’s masks
They were the true flower

He and his glory
Over me did tower

Then I crafted the forbidden mask
Now of my fine craft none shall ask

Second Song of Makuta (G2)

My brother now lays asleep in tomb
My horde of spiders over lands shall comb

To bring me the masks of power
So it is I that over him tower

I raised the Intruders from the dead
So I can fill Okotans’ hearts with dread

And all this is means to the end
No one shall ever forget me again

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Oh, I really like it. I can’t wait for more.

I’ve always wanted to write some poetry in English but I don’t know how metrics work in English since I’m Spanish (and I’ve wrote some poems in my language). The metrics are very different from each other, I guess (or maybe not if there are sonnets in both languages, I dunno).

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I like this very much, especially the red star!

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I have two more. First post was also updated with two new ones.

Song of Tren Krom

I aM tHe TrUe UnIvErSaL kInG

I sEe EvErYtHiNg
EvErYtHiNg
EvErYtHiNg

BeCaUsE oF mE tHiS uNiVeRsE tHrIvEs

BuT i WaS eXiLeD
ExIlEd
ExIlEd

By ThOsE wHo GaVe Me ThE pOwEr

BuT i WaS eXiLeD
ExIlEd
ExIlEd

ByThOsE wHo GaVe Me ThE pOwEr

Annona’s Lullaby

Sleep little one

I am the sun

Fall asleep
To my shine

Sleep little one

I am the sun

Your thoughts
Are food of mine

Sleep little one

I am the sun

On your dreams
I shall dine

Sleep little one

I am the sun

Fall asleep
To
My shine

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These are really cool.

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Song of Makuta (Late G1)

(Teridax to the Brotherhood)
I have plans beyond plans beyond plans
Deliberate
Manipulate
To obtain the ultimate power
Deliberate
Manipulate
For the Brotherhood!

(Brotherhood Choir)

We will storm the throne of the God
Succeed where the Six Kings failed

God of this world shall sleep
Fall into the deep
And we shall reign

We shall strive
To poison the god
In holy name
Of the Brotherhood!

Eternal Reign
Shall be ours
We shall carve our names in the stars!

We will storm the throne of the God
Succeed where the Six Kings failed

God of this world shall sleep
Fall into the deep
And we shall reign

(Teridax, when the meeting ends, and everyone but him leaves)

I have plans beyond plans beyond plans
Deliberate
Manipulate
To obtain the ultimate power
Deliberate
Manipulate
To attain Godhood

I will storm the throne of the God
Succeed where the Six Kings failed

God of this world shall sleep
Fall into the deep
And I shall reign

I shall strive
To poison the god
To ascend to the stars
To attain Godhood

Eternal Reign
Shall be mine
In my name the stars shall forever shine

I will storm the throne of the God
Succeed where the Six Kings failed

God of this world shall sleep
Fall into the deep
And I shall reign!

Savior (AU)

(This uses spoilers for artistic effect. At first, this song conceals its true nature. Click on the blurred sections to reveal the truth.)
(Spoken introduction begins here)

Awaken Matoran from your wakeless sleep
I am the Great Spirit, ruler of the Heavens Above
My power is great and and my generosity greater

I command the beast and the fish and the bird
Even the snake and the spider praise me
I provide you blessings of sleep
Flowers bloom in my name

I am your selfless savior, saving you from
The cataclysm that shook foundations of the world
I rescue you from certain doom
For my generosity is boundless

Only thing I humbly ask in turn
Is for you to thanks me for this noble deed
And to praise my holy name

(The song itself begins here)

x- I am your selfless savior -x
x- When it works in my favor -x

x- You are noble creatures of the Light -x
x- I am the dark lord of the Night -x

x- I rebuilt this city -x
x- On the sacred grounds -x
x- My audacity -x
x- Knows no bounds -x

x- I am the carrier of the wisdom -x
x- I came from the sky -x
x- Bow to my eternal kingdom -x
x- Comply with the serpent’s cry -x

x- I am the Light -x
x- Swallowed by the Night -x
x- Receive from me the salvation -x
x- My own grand fabrication -x

(The reprise of the song begins here)

x- I am your selfless savior -x
x- When it works in my favor -x

x- You are noble creatures of the Light -x
x- I am the dark lord of the Night -x

x- I rebuilt this city -x
x- On the sacred grounds -x
x- My audacity -x
x- Knows no bounds -x

x- I am the carrier of the wisdom -x
x- I came from the sky -x
x- Bow to my eternal kingdom -x
x- Comply with the serpent’s cry -x

x- I am your Salvation -x
x- From doom of my creation -x
x- I am the Light -x
x- Swallowed by the Night -x
x- I give you the sight -x

x- Fear my might! -x