Here’s Zack my self moc. He was first Detox rip off but soon became something way more interestin. He’s also my first moc who uses this kind of custom body design. I also know that grey part on his hip looks out placed but It’s only thing to get some lengt. Wings are optional good and fully adjustable. They can be removed and used as a gun holsters. Tell me what you think and what I should do to try make him more awesome.
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Nice.
I quite like this.
Moved Category -OmegaT
Steampunk Top Hat 10/10 (Its really cool)
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Umm…
Self MOC’s are supposed to be unique…not be Detox with a few add ons.
I’m not hating, but some of the designs from Detox were copied and pasted onto this.
The MOC is ok on its own, but you may want to rethink the title of him being your “Self-MOC”.
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Great build, although the detox rip-off does still shine through a little bit. Mostly just because he’s got a Rahkshi head with a top-hat.
Not too shabby, my only issues being that he is super skinny, and of course the Detox parallel. Maybe changing some designs, swapping out the colors and maybe giving him a traditional head with mask would help him out. After all, a SelfMOC needs to show who you are, and you are a unique and special person who deserves a unique and special MOC.
RT~
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I’m not a fan of how thin the torso gets, but other than that, the MOC is pretty good.
This is nice and will not repet the critic that others have given. Instead i will say that i really like the wings and weapons and that you should try and only have one shade of yellow on him, not two.
Yes I try rebuild him sometime.
######OH HEY ITS DETOX
Jokes aside, this is good.
I don’t really like the wings tho
Nice. I don’t know who Detox is so… 10/10?
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You’ve still got a way to go, but it’s looking nice. I would work on those wing things.
self moc of Biorockdude, who is sorta well known during the years between g1 and g2, and basically his self moc looks similar to the moc of this topic
though I admit it does look abit different(mainly it appears more like the classic one, which was all black with gold accents) , but still needs more techniques(nothing overly complicated or whatever) to make it entirely seperate. Maybe adding parts or changing it up
still good tho, I don’t have any qualms with it
Hey look! It’s Detox! Yeah yeah, I know. So original.
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I think the only issue I take with this is the use of a standard Rahkshi head. Other than that it’s an interesting and well designed moc.
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I like how this looks.
I really like the staff and top hat.
Although, his waist is a bit thin. Not sure really how you’d fix that at all.
Hey,That’s Pretty Good!
9/10
Nice Detox MOC.
…oh wait that joke’s already been used.
Uhhhhh.
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Rakshi head -5
Top hat +15
Final Score 10/10
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