Bionicle MoC: Vendetta

Butt is way too square man.

Rhakshi head/10

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news flash: you’re not everyone

How…
In what way…
Are you joking?

Seriously, you’ve gotta be kidding me.

If you’re trying to twist my points around into making it look like I advocate the censorship of criticism, then I’m done. Never did I say that you can’t give criticism. Are you just looking at this in black and white? Did you read my posts wrong?

I’m going to put a stop to this now before it progresses.

For some reason, people in this community can not handle female MOCs at all. You guys did a brilliant job of proving his point.

Any further posts on the subject of female MOCs or this debate, and not about critiques of the MOC itself, will be deleted and the member warned. Ignoring this warning or continuing to argue this will result in a suspension.

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I for one like this moc for one reason: the use of system. Although it may be a bit unproportonial, I still like the good balance of system and ccbs

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@Eljay Hi Eljay it’s a pleasure to meet you on the TTV message boards! I just wanna say I love the format of your moc reviews. So much in fact that I try to emulate it a little with my own moc reviews. Keep being awesome man!

I make the MOC reviews. Glad you appreciate my format. Keep being awesome, man.

(btw eljay doesnt do anything relevant or important)

)=< - Eljay

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Sorry about that! I meant to say that I try to emulate Eljay’s recap reviews with my moc reviews. Ven, your MOC Spotlight videos are just as awesome! Hopefully I’ll make an appearance on it someday soon… hopefully :smiley:

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Well. I seem to have shown up after the storm.

Aside from the posing on the second picture I actually have no problems with this. It’s overdone, yes, but it’s not cripplingly overdone like some of the other MOCs I’ve seen.

The legs are a little too blocky. I’d recommend pulling out some of the system in exchange for something you can make a little smoother. The “hair” technique is overused but I can’t exactly fault you for reusing designs, it just doesn’t look the greatest on this design.

The feet are extremely blocky as well. Might wanna smooth those out.

Otherwise? Pretty decent. I like the scythe too. :ok_hand:

@Ekorak I definitely agree with you on the thighs being a little too blocky. It was the best I could do with an inherently blocky building system… Do you have any suggestions on what other pieces I could use? Same with the feet, they’re my best attempt at making platform heels on that scale and I’m open to suggestions. And thank you, I like the scythe too!
@Shadowrockboy190 Thank you! I’d like to think in terms of the length of the limbs that she’s pretty proportionate.
@exxtrooper but she thicc tho
@Chronicler While I agree with you about the stickers, I honestly can’t bring myself to remove them. I feel like they’re “exclusive pieces” used in some sets and most of the time, after you apply a sticker and remove it, you can’t ever use them again
Do you have any suggestions on what to do for the feet? like I said before they’re my best attempt at making platforms on that scale. And I fully agree with you on the back. It was a terrible idea to use a piece with such angular textures. And sorry to say, but I’ve grown quite attached to the weapon and I’m most likely not changing it. Thank you very much for the comment!

Well, my characters tend to be, as you put it, extra t h i c c, and I use Technic for most of that. Unfortunately my scale is small in comparison to most MOCists, meaning that my designs are difficult to carry over.

The heels I might be able to help with as long as you don’t want extremely realistic looking platform heels. There’s a small design from a MOC I made a while back that is more of a streamlined low-heeled foot, but aside from that I typically just use Bohrok feet since they are visually clean and easy to use.

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