Of course I knew that, that’s why I acted like it was.
/s
This does look like a Bionicle stew. There is no unity to this at all. There are half a dozen colors on the feet, literally. That in and of itself is objective.
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Umm, buddy, it’s uh…kinda just a MOC
It’s literally text on a screen, no need to feel bad,
Also jeez, calm down man.
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- yes it is, to me
- yes I can
- I did, I agreed with Cal
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This might seem pretty Elitist to say, but alot of us who are giving criticism are frequent posters. We’ve seen a variety of MOCs, ranging from the best to the not so best. From the MOCs we’ve seen, we give unbiased, right-to-the-point criticism. We honestly want to help you grow as a Moccist, as you’ve shown work that blasts potential.
I would say @Calvatron and @Payinku give some of the best criticism; as there is usually no sugar coat.
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^^^^
Came here to make this point. There’s no shame whatsoever in making a MOC that doesn’t live up to the very highest of standards, especially if you’re not super-duper-experienced. Just try to take it all in stride and make your next MOC even better. 
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Agreeing with most people here. Definitely not getting any seals of approval anytime soon.
I has made updates took out mist of the green and focused more on gold and black as primary colors and blue and silver as secondaries also added jetpack and updated rocket skis that look more cohesive with rest of the moc
Also srry for outburst yesterday i was tired and overreacted
where are these updates?
I gotta take pics they will be on soon
There’s definitely a lot going on, perhaps by removing some of the excess colours you could make is seem a bit more cohesive?
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The break in the cohesiveness is the pins and axles
Curse you colored axles and pins
That’s not what anybody was talking about.
Technically pins and acles have to do with flaws in color scheme
Also plz kinda appreciate it i looked for 2 hours just to find the right parts for this and was up till 12 changing my minecraft skin and getting the terraria armor to replace the parts i changed on this moc
I question how changing game stuff affects the process
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But no one was talking about the pins and axles. sure they hurt a MOC in loooking consistent, but it’s the least of your problems here.
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Not in the slightest. I count at least six colors, which is exactly half a dozen.
No, look no further for BIONICLE stew than this topic. This is the epitome of stew.
I’ve told something similar to Yink before.
If it works for you, fine, whatever.
I’m still allowed to hate it.
Gold will only fix this if you remove the other colors first. ALL of them. Except one or two secondary colors.
I’m going to actually state my little “philosophy” about MOCing here. This isn’t aimed at you so much as everybody, so please don’t take offense. It’s just my thoughts in a nutshell.
You should never MOC if you’re not prepared to listen to critique.
You seem offended by critique that is 100% legitimate.
Please don’t be offended by 100% legitimate critique.
C:
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Frame is pretty alright, abeit top-heavy.
Colors are frankly a complete mess, though.
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Yo @BNKHawaii , you should listen to @Ekorak and @Payinku . I’ve got first hand experience of their critique, and it truthfully does help. When I joined le Boards, I had my first completely-ish custom MOC that I was super proud of, but in truth it wasn’t that great. With the help of Ek and Yink And Bricklink! my self MOC has become MUCH better.
Disregarding the text wall, the MOC is okay at best in my opinion. The frame for the torso looks pretty good actually, legs are a bit cluttered, and with some tidying up the weapons could be pretty neat. Clean up the colors, maybe redo the legs and weapons, and you might have a solid MOC, although to quote a very skilled MOCist,
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2 points for pros and -1 points for cons
Pros
Creative
Heads cool
Blade rules
Gun is ok
Cons
Color scheme is terrible
Rocket skis are dumb
Arms are overly simplistic
Looks flimsy
Overall score… 4
Cons are flowing from this moc
I would recommend more cohesiveness in color scheme and no rocket skis
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