Yo @BNKHawaii , you should listen to @Ekorak and @Payinku . I’ve got first hand experience of their critique, and it truthfully does help. When I joined le Boards, I had my first completely-ish custom MOC that I was super proud of, but in truth it wasn’t that great. With the help of Ek and Yink And Bricklink! my self MOC has become MUCH better.
Disregarding the text wall, the MOC is okay at best in my opinion. The frame for the torso looks pretty good actually, legs are a bit cluttered, and with some tidying up the weapons could be pretty neat. Clean up the colors, maybe redo the legs and weapons, and you might have a solid MOC, although to quote a very skilled MOCist,
8 Likes
2 points for pros and -1 points for cons
Pros
Creative
Heads cool
Blade rules
Gun is ok
Cons
Color scheme is terrible
Rocket skis are dumb
Arms are overly simplistic
Looks flimsy
Overall score… 4
Cons are flowing from this moc
I would recommend more cohesiveness in color scheme and no rocket skis
All hail, THE KING OF GUNS!