Spartan #6 female
Spartan #7 male
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Idk maybe it’s the masks or weird torsos but I don’t think these look like spartans.
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7 has really strange proportions that make him look a bit goofy
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They’re actually pretty cool but they’re definitely imperfect. 6 has a really nice design, 7 has a nice idea but looks clunkier and it’s proportions are a bit weird. Both have awesome guns. The main issue I have with both is that they don’t really look like Spartans at all, I can kind of see how 6 tried to emulate the Spartan armor in some way, but I think a combination of system and technic might work better for something like this.
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The first looks good, but the second has a weird torso.
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These look cool but they look more like Toa with guns, especially the second one. You should probably make a custom head with a visor since Spartans have that on their helmets.
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All the Spartans i build have temporary masks i want to get 3D printed pnes from Shapways but idk how it works T^T
These are good mocs, but they really dont look like spartans
warning this possibly may be harsh:
ok, so with female spartan
Im going to use this as an example for a guide.
First off the chest doesn’t need to make the moc look like Jessica Rabbit in armor with a skeleton mask. Normally that kind of chest would be used for much bigger builds. The shoulders can be toned down a bit while her legs can not just be simple inika builds with hero factory clown shoes for feet. The color scheme is a mess even though orange and silver is an easy color scheme to pull off and I don’t get how you were able to fail that. The weapon is pretty simple and for what this moc is, its hard to tell what this is supposed to be without needing to someone telling me its supposed to be a Halo Spartan.
Spartan male
This ^ is what a spartan looks like. What you have looks like a mutated box troll. Im seeing a lot of things that are very similar when it comes to problems with your other moc specifically the upper body. The body is too square and needs to be fixed including the his waist, this moc looks like an ant could break it in half just by tipping it over, its that dangerous. the color scheme is a bit cleaner this time but it still makes me think of someones period in a toilet bowl, its just out of shape (trust me Live with two sisters). And don’t tell me he’s also trying to be Elsa with those trans ice blue hands because I think he should let it go.
Other wise end results, I’ve seen mega blocks do better.
By passing the insults I suggest your fix the waist and fix the color schemes. If your short on parts which is many problems I get from talking to other mocist, then i suggest your either buy a lot from Ebay or consider Bricklink as a resource. Know when and not to use a certain piece in a build, and don’t stop trying to moc, I see potential.
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