Hangshei, Terror of Okoto's Seas

"I'm the reason no one leaves Okoto."

I even gave him a slicing function! that I can't demonstrate in a video cause I'm not a Master

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Looks awkward, but still pretty cool.The Mata foot sticking out REALLY bothers me, though.

Uh... Was he meant to look non-humanoid? 'Cause he does.

Also, you can post videos, but only if they are not promoting or advertising. stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye

Plural's Quick Review:

  • Torso build is rather flat
  • Arms are Odd and unproportional to the body
  • Color Scheme is Messy
  • Open Balljoints are Meh
  • Open Pins are Meh
  • The Feet on the back look pretty bad.

I would give this MOC a 2/10.

Unsalvageable

I'm sorry if my criticism was too harsh.

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This what happens when Rahi mating is Unmonitored

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You may want to go back to the drawing board on your torso design.

Also chestplates don't work for armguards.

Please don't hate me.

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@MiraculousPrime I'll try to use something other than the Mata foot.

@TFM101 He's meant to be a mutated sea rahi who got chopped up through a dimensional portal.

@Plural_Scrub *waaaaaahhh* What can I remove from the colour scheme?

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That's the type of thing you put in the initial post!

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Good point. I'm trying to make him look like a chopped up freaky, uh, well, thing. Any ideas?

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I would personally scrap the Trans. Lightest Blue, Red, Gunmetal, and Blue.

So, all the colours?

I'm really sorry I had to say this, but he looks like a krongiwongi.

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Me Kronkiwongsta (that's good)

No; I think you should have two main colors and one highlight. In this case, the Metru Blue, Black, and Trans. Blue.

What torso should I use?

to quote @Calvatron
'story doesn't excuse the moc's problems.'

this thing is a mess.

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Does anyone have any gasoline I could borrow?

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Plural's Avo Boi's Quick Review:

  • Torso build is rather flat
  • Arms are Odd and unproportional to the body
  • Color Scheme is Messy
  • Open Balljoints are Meh
  • Open Pins are Meh
  • The Feet on the back look pretty bad.

I would give this MOC a 2/10.

Unsalvageable.


Mwa ha ha! @Plural_Scrub, now, not only do I steal your review style, but your whole reviews! HA HA HA HA HA!

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But now you're not TTVMB's Nice Guy.

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So... Plural's review style is super quick and to the point, let's do that.

-The digit grade legs look awkward and disproportionate
-The torso makes no sense
-Color scheme is literally all over the place
-Open ball joints everywhere
-Overall just doesn't make any sense.

I give it a 1/10. I recommend a redo, or trying some way to make this look streamlined and make sense.

Plural your review style is quick and ease. I approve of this style.

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