I like how the piston in the shin stands out, since the Vorox are most organic with only a few mechanical parts.
I also like the decision to use that Hero Factory blaster as the Force Blaster. It’s a simple design never before seen in Bionicle, and it matches the description.
“Strangely, Kabrua kept seeing large structures that could not have been built by any species he knew. That and the black, circular pool that was constantly being lowered to his eye level.”
I like Vorox in general, and this is fantastic! The legs look especially neat and powerful. The forearms might be too much brown by just a hair, but there’s not much to be done about that.
I’ve been wanting to make my own version of Kabrua for a while, and I think this just got my creative side back up and running. This has a lot of stuff that I’ve been looking to use, like the heavy emphasis of the cyborg elements compared to the regular Vorox and the Hero Factory launcher as the Force Blaster.
I never had the thought of using Avak brown, though. It really works well. Overall, nicely done.
This is definitely by favorite Kabrua of the ones I’ve seen. Granted, I haven’t seen all that many Kabrua Mocs. I like how you didn’t just make him a big Vorox, but also gave him some unique features, like the digitigrade legs, hunched back, reddish brown, and larger staff.
I really like how (unlike other Kabrua build’s I’ve seen) you’ve made him both still feel like a Vorox while also distinguishing him clearly from the others. Most go too far one way or the other (and he ends up looking either samey, or like some weird subspecies instead of just a big fella). Probably the best MoC of him I’ve seen.
Great Force Blaster too - I know it’s just a retool of the Hero Factory weapons, but it matches the description (and that one panel from Mata-Nui Saga that I like to headcanon shows Force Blasters) really nicely.